Excerpt from prologue 'War is Hell' by my teenage son

Excerpt from a prologue from my 15 year old dyslexic sons first attempt at fiction/fantasy

Amber eyes glared down upon a name tag embroidered with his name L.koleshc. Amber eyes stuck quivering, quavering with the horrors of this world, dark bags hanging underneath them. Breaths heavy, slowly drawn. Complexion slightly tanned with a few freckles scattered around, more centred around his forehead. Others just like him, sitting, waiting out the current hail of fire. Joy a fleeting memory of the world he is here protecting.

Cold arctic blue eyes, filled with emptiness

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Brilliant writing! What a great job your young son had done here. Great imagery, emotion, depth. Eloquent and dramatic language. Keep writing young man, you have amazing talent!

[O'Musings]

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment upon my son's work. I'm very grateful for your feedback!!

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

You are very welcome! He has great talent above and despite his challenges. Love seeing budding writers...

[O'Musings]

Thank you , many great authors & writers are dyslexic. Even Agatha Christie was dyslexic. Pretty amazing .. I guess as a learning difference they see and process words, thoughts & images differently