Sadness is a sin

Sadness is a sin

A Poem by Bella-Marie
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:-(

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Gravity pushing

Pushing me ever closer

Closer to my death

 

I hold on for life

But life is not what I want

I don't want to live

 

The heavens open

Rain pours down my tear-streaked face

My grip slowly slips

 

I let the cliff go

I let the hard ground hit me

I fall to my death

© 2009 Bella-Marie


Author's Note

Bella-Marie
erm... sad?

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Well written and a good use of words =-)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Definitely depressing, but either way well written!! I loved the imagery! Great Job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Simple but well written It is sad but it could hold more emotion within the writing... The imagery was beautiful though.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on August 10, 2009
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Bella-Marie
Bella-Marie

Hamilton, Waikato, New Zealand



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