He is all Mine

He is all Mine

A Poem by Bella-Marie
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Written for... uh...

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Hair of gold

Eyes of wonder

 

Intriguing voice

Smile of joy

 

A face so perfect

Looking at me

Lips saying...

 

My name

I’ll never let him go

Never

Ever

 

He is all mine

© 2010 Bella-Marie


Author's Note

Bella-Marie
Uh... um... is it... a good... poem??? Did you get the acrostic bit?

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thats very clever very well writen

Posted 14 Years Ago


simple and lovely poem with short lines, well penned....
enjoyed reading your poem.....

Posted 14 Years Ago


oh wow - very clever with the acrostic bit - very sweet poem too. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Well Done!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I'll have to look up acrostic but I like your style. I love this kind of rhyming; subtle. Seems chock full of rhymes but it's difficult to place where. Terrific.
Oh, I keep a dictionary with me and no I didn't notice the "he is all mine"; I don't, usually, rate (compared to what?) but you get bonus points. Where do those ratings show up anyhow?
a hundred, either way.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I liked it. The spacing made me feel like I needed to pause more, which through off the rhythm. But other than that, this is a good poem

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on January 11, 2010
Last Updated on January 18, 2010

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Bella-Marie
Bella-Marie

Hamilton, Waikato, New Zealand



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See that picture? Yeah, the profile picture of me. Yeah, yeah, that one! Well, that's my cat, I know! She's so cute, eh! I love my cat, she's the bomb. No, you're cat can't me as good as mine... maybe.. more..

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