Knitting

Depressing but hilarious.

Crying.
Screaming in agony.
Pain cutting into my brain, my flesh, my soul.
Life hanging my a piece of thread.
Scissors looming.

A snip.
A tiny snip.
And my whole life falls.
Downwards, falling.
Unravelling at the seams.

Silence.

Author's Note

For linda.

Reviews

[Livana Lowell]

I kind of get it, if the you mean to say in the first few lines about absolute pain and then the sciscors represent some kind of tool. I'm getting the impression of suicide. Now, I might be wrong, but if so, I like it, but if not, then huh????? Lol, n'ways, good job, though.

[mischeif]

'HUH???????????????????????"

[Havatara]

I thought it was cute. I'm not entirely sure what you're trying to SAY with it, if you're even trying to say something, but it had a great rhythm and I loved it.