Space and Pain

Space and Pain

A Poem by Bella-Marie
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I like this poem, even if the title is offputting

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I'm flying through space
I'm landing on the moon
I'm pushing through comments
I'll be with you soon

I'll sleep on a bed of thorns
I'll stab myself with pins
I'll starve myself for days
I'm wanting just to win

I'm laughing at sunset with you
I'm happy I went through pain
I'm happy I braved outerspace
TO BE WITH YOU AGAIN!

© 2010 Bella-Marie


Author's Note

Bella-Marie
I know it's a bit weird and not my best, but can you forgive me???

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Yes I can forgive you, because it's great. Kinda confusing at first, but still great.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Hahahaha. You really are the romantic type. Great poem and flick yourself with a rubber band for that Author's note the poem was great. It flowed very smoothly and I couldn't right that

Posted 10 Years Ago


nothing to forgive; it flowed smoothly and the author took us step by step; methodically through various emotions, physical pains of time and space.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on May 28, 2010
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Bella-Marie
Bella-Marie

Hamilton, Waikato, New Zealand



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See that picture? Yeah, the profile picture of me. Yeah, yeah, that one! Well, that's my cat, I know! She's so cute, eh! I love my cat, she's the bomb. No, you're cat can't me as good as mine... maybe.. more..

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