His World

A poem about a boy and a girl hopelessly in love...

His world is my world now, and I plan to never ever let it go.

When he looks at me with his angels eyes, nothing else matters.
When he takes my hand with his strong hand, my heart explodes.
When his soft lips move with speech, I am caught up in the sound of his perfect voice.
When he laughs his joyful laugh, it makes me want to join in.
When he says he loves me, I believe him and smile.
When he puts his arms around me, I am wrapped in his true love.
When he catches me, I know I will never fall from his arms.
When we dance together, it's just us.
When he kisses me, I am caught up in a dizzy spin if love and have to hold him for support, for love.
When I spot him anywhere, I can't help but go up to him and show my pleasure.
When he's at my door come to pick me up, I am filled with an inextiguishable love.

We were made as two puzzle peices, designed to fit.

But when he left, my world collapsed around me into a hundred thousand sharp peices.
When he came back, my world healed and I knew I would never let him go,and he would never let me go again.

Author's Note

Ignore spelling and mistakes!!

Reviews

[Alys Jackson]

Really sweet really captures love and hurt. Another amazing piece of work. Ms Wood my English teacher loved it also. She said 'The author of this poem is very talented. What else has he/she written?'

[Peachgirl]

Thanks!! xx