Do You See?

Do you see?

Do you see the oak in the forest?

Just there!

On the edge of the clearing

Look at him!

See how tall he is

How noble

How strong

He is magnificent

Do you see?

Do you see the daffodil by the oak?

Just there!

By the trunk of the tree

Look at him!

See how colourful he is

How dashing

How bright

He is resplendent

Do you see?

Do you see the oak and the daffodil?

Just there!

Standing together in the forest

Look at them!

See how content they are

How perfect

How peaceful

They are united

Do you see?

Do you see the lesson of the forest?

Reviews

[Tinman07]

A simple, yet deep, view of how different species can live in harmony. The lesson? I guess why can't we?
I sounded like Macca then 'Ebony and Ivory'.

[T.S. Claus]

I like the pace and wording of this!

[Ben Barton]

Thanks Tyler!

[Hannah Grace]

wow, absolutely wonderful!

[Ben Barton]

Thanks Grace!

[Hannah Grace]

no problem!

[Ellen Kolman]

OMG! love love love this poem...your style is a lot like mine...this poem is simple and sublime...just love it............

[Ben Barton]

Thanks Ellen!