The Stranger

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I walked into a familiar room
and saw a stranger there
he sat quiet looking at me
with a distant piercing stare

"What's wrong my friend?" I ask concerned
And he simply says "I've become a burden to the world."
When I wake it isn't waking, but one step closer to the end.
I walk alone always faking, believing that I'm real
however, I'm so broken I can't even feel.

I single tear rolls down his face and his lip begins to quiver
I walk over to embrace him, but i bump into a mirror.

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[SR Urie]

Whoa!

Great rhyme and reason and meter. You obviously put some effort into this one, getting your point across while divulging the despair we all sometimes fee.

Thanks for sharing!BZ