Just Lucky!

Just Lucky!

A Poem by Deepika


Amidst a thick wood was a shrub of yellow flower,

Crawling over its stem, elevated a hairy spider!

With all her intellect, she laid a trappy web,

The stalk of the flower became her new resting hub!

 

From far off a mile came a bumble bee humming,

Among all flowers found this one stunning!

Having a road map in her mind,

She had nothing else to dread!

With glee, she started gathering all the nectar,

Not realizing she's gonna be trapped in a snare!

 

Signalling thread of the cobweb reverberated,

Witty spider was now red-alerted!

Bee just realized she has been trapped,

Wishing the strings somehow could be snapped,

Neither her pleading to 'let go' work,

Nor her stinging could do the spider any irk

 

The spider was just drooling to taste her prey,

Just then, a wild boar came pacing that way,

Peeing on the yellow plant, he left wagging his petty tail,

With the web being washed off the spider now frowned,

The bee now fluttered with total glee,

Silently she thanked the bear for setting her free!

 

© 2015 Deepika


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Lifes a waiting game and you never know which side of the game you're on till the last bell rings. It is that uncertainty and unpredictability of a good or bad outcome that makes us galvanize our efforts in life and keep faith in the outcome.
Great read deepika, Very unassuming way to convey such depth! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Deepika

9 Years Ago

So true!! Thanks Roshan :)



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Even though the title suggests 'Just Lucky'... I don't think you writing this was just down to luck... but your inherent talent:) *silent clap* :P

Posted 9 Years Ago


Deepika

9 Years Ago

Aww thank you :P I could hear it;)
Lifes a waiting game and you never know which side of the game you're on till the last bell rings. It is that uncertainty and unpredictability of a good or bad outcome that makes us galvanize our efforts in life and keep faith in the outcome.
Great read deepika, Very unassuming way to convey such depth! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Deepika

9 Years Ago

So true!! Thanks Roshan :)
enjoyed reading this work of yours too... good one

Posted 9 Years Ago


Deepika

9 Years Ago

Thanks Anurag :)
wow.... Really enjoyed reading it an interesting write.... :)
keep writing...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Deepika

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much...:)
A cute and clever way to play with expectations. Even when something seems bad, it may actually be good. When something seems good, it may end up being bad. You won't know unless you wait and see.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Deepika

9 Years Ago

So true! Life can take unexpected twists.thank you for stopping by Justin :)
Ha!!!!!! just a interesting write.
Lovely........

Posted 9 Years Ago


Deepika

9 Years Ago

Thankie SSADD :)
Wow! I enjoyed reading this excellent piece of work, Deepika. The narration was gripped and well expressed. Kudoz to you!☺

-Anjana

Posted 9 Years Ago


Deepika

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Anjana :)
Hah ! I loved the playfulness of this - its really fun. More of these - can't get enough funnies round here...

Thanks for cheering me up Deepika :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


Deepika

9 Years Ago

Thanks Anto !:D glad you enjoyed it :)

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Deepika
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