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A Poem by Betty Hermelee
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HAIKU

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Jitters, clasp hands firm
bodies swim in cold pure air
release,float,breathe,dream

© 2020 Betty Hermelee


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Nice. Dream a little dream of me.

Posted 4 Years Ago


that seems sometimes like it is the only time we are free...
as Mama Cass sang..."dream a little dream of me"
i like the bodies swimming in the cold air....nice.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah, those dreams do free us, if only for the moments. Good write, Betty.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Betty Hermelee
Betty Hermelee

Black Mountain, NC



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My love of poetry results from my love of art. As a painter I am able to express myself on a canvas. As a poet my words come from my heart, my moods, sometimes sad, mostly upbeat. I like to use vivid .. more..

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