ANGER'S RHAPSODY

BREVITY POEM mood change Thank you for reading

Dispute spent

two of us

heads oppose

under cool sheets

angry eyes, panting

detach, rhapsodic dreams

Cerulean Blue dawn

streaks of light

unintended

we embrace

Author's Note

mood swings

Reviews

[Unspoken poet]

Such a beautiful write, I enjoyed this

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you my new friend! I just read one of your poems.

[emmajoy]

The simplicity of love? Said to be the spark that keeps the fire going? Let alone, wait, breathe and - who knows, you might birth beautiful poetry like the above, Betty! Hello and tarrah.. and thank you. Stay safe, my good morning friend. (Graphic is more than.. ..)

[Betty Hermelee]

And a good day to you too my friend!! Thanks again for a thoughtful review...tarrah!
Yours, B

[emmajoy]

Smiling at your 'tarrah ( or 'turrah or ta ra') . A friendly word with an unspoken will be back included! Now into Wednesday,, so yet another one of those words.. please take your pick. :) tkae Onto a no

[Danny Metcalfe]

I like the lines: ''Cerulean Blue dawn
streaks of light
unintended
we embrace''

Nice images. Would make a nice painting.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks Danny for a lovely review!
Best. B

[Poetic Beauty]

One moment being angry and the next feeling loving. Oh how our emotions can do crazy things sometimes

[Betty Hermelee]

Yes they do and so many thanks for reading!
Best, B

[jacob erin-cilberto]

chaos can lead to such passion...fighting is bad, but the making up under those sheets...Well, that is a different story altogether. Love the oxymoron in the title.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks so much for a great review J
You’re always spot on!
Best, B