LOVE IS A BLUR

LOVE IS A BLUR

A Poem by Betty Hermelee
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misty love,abstraction

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LOVE IS A BLUR

 

The fog shrouds me

 

sadly, only a blur among many

 

he solely views

 

the sketch of my frame

 

though the hues of the painting

 

uncover noticeably more

 

I transform into a rainbow

 

yellow, orange, blue, pink

 

after a torrent

 

you can behold my cipher in a fragile mist

© 2021 Betty Hermelee


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Very visual and that is what first attracted me to this layered write.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Betty Hermelee

4 Weeks Ago

Thanks Ken, sorry for the delay, a lovely review!
Best, B
Excellent! This piece really spoke to me

Posted 1 Month Ago


Betty Hermelee

1 Month Ago

Thank you for stopping by to appreciate my poem.
Best, Betty
I so admire your words as well as your posted image Betty. When love feels like a fog and is unrecognised, how sad that is. However when it appears as a rainbow after a torrent, then surely that is irrisistible. That's where you took me dear poet :)

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


Betty Hermelee

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words Chris, much appreciated
Best to you, B.
dearest Betty... it has been Ages, since I
witnessed a Rainbow. Prior to Five years ago...
we would see at least one large Rainbow across
our Sky every Summer. That must be a "clue"
of climate change-- or something more mysterious.
I tend to wear many colors in every Season...
always for a Reason. Your poem is colored with deep feelings.
tenderly, Pat

Posted 1 Month Ago


Ah but this is lovely.; your selective
chosen words placed so eloquently
matches your painting perfectly..
your aura in rainbow hues shines
thru~ the fragile mist.

nice work


Posted 1 Month Ago


Betty Hermelee

4 Weeks Ago

Thanks for a lovely review, much appreciated
Best, B.
Indeed, the fog is an equal opportunity obscurer. It is up to the individual to stand out in its midst. Such is the power of the artist, to trace a vision that gives character to the mist. Is this painting one of yours?

Posted 1 Month Ago


Betty Hermelee

1 Month Ago

Thank you John, no this is not mine….but because in the NC mountains we get a lot of fog, thus the.. read more

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Added on October 25, 2021
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Betty Hermelee
Betty Hermelee

Black Mountain, NC



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My love of poetry results from my love of art. As a painter I am able to express myself on a canvas. As a poet my words come from my heart, my moods, sometimes sad, mostly upbeat. I like to use vivid .. more..

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