Ahhh!! I feel the emotions, the physical condition, the wrestling with aging within these lines. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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1 Week Ago
thank you so much for visiting Sara, and writing a lovely review, much appreciated🌷
warmly.. read morethank you so much for visiting Sara, and writing a lovely review, much appreciated🌷
warmly, B
What a brilliant write, u made everything make perfect sense, the flow is really good to.,
The ending was super good, and carried a powerful message. Thanks for sharing.
-Amy
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1 Week Ago
thank you Amy for a lovely and thoughtful review!
warmly, B🌷
It is somehow serenity into this description, this man exhausted of walking through life finding a place where he finds peace and fulfilment, where his pains are eased, your lines have beautifully achieved the emotion and scenery compliment it and it makes it a beautiful read!
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1 Week Ago
thank you P.V. for an intuitive and lovely review, much appreciated🌷
warmly, B
I was once homeless but then I rode trains knew where every train would go by its cargo but time would pass and so would I until I thought I would ride again but it drop.me off in a forest down deep in a valley, I knew no train would save me if I didn't find a highway to get me to my goal but old and tired I would never know unless I would stand and fight the will to survive to stand the test of time. Great write .
Thank you for sharing.
Posted 2 Weeks Ago
2 Weeks Ago
thank you dear Mauricio for a lovely review🌷
warmly, B.
A beautiful picture, a gentle tone holding the reader within a poem.. a finish but - Life as we don't know it.. yet. For me, this is a welcome - not death. Shows how death can come whenever and might not be the ugliness we know of. For self - having seen and felt too many deaths in my birth family, would prefer the walk into' his holy ground is where I leave you, now I am with my forest creatures for whom I am eternally grateful'
That is how leaving life's party should be - not artificial lights and white clothing and clatter and.. and..
Rather than tragic, your words are beautiful, dear Betty.
Posted 2 Weeks Ago
2 Weeks Ago
Thank you EM for a heartfelt review; A bittersweet ending to life...we should all experience an endi.. read moreThank you EM for a heartfelt review; A bittersweet ending to life...we should all experience an ending of grace ...Hugs, B
2 Weeks Ago
How very true. Hugs and best wishes, as ever, dear friend.
This is beautiful Betty, i love this kind of poem that contains elements of our spirituality and how our souls become more content and accepting with age.
If i had written this i would be very pleased with myself as i hope you are as your words describe the vulnerabilty of a life well lived coming to an end, he has fallen and risen before but now is the time to rest in peace.
Posted 3 Weeks Ago
3 Weeks Ago
Thank you Stella for a lovely interpretation of my poem…. i am smiling! i hope you are well….read moreThank you Stella for a lovely interpretation of my poem…. i am smiling! i hope you are well….
warmly, B🌷
I always enjoy a good story my dearest Betty... One with a beginning , a middle and an ending...sort of like my Forevermore poem about my own death. Really liked it...Yes, when ones time is up...
Being confined by age is such a sad thought... we all need to strive to be content in the end...
Life is so very very short...
How are you feeling...how is your shoulder.
Lisa
Posted 3 Weeks Ago
3 Weeks Ago
Hi Lisa
Thank you so much for your thoughtful review; yes life is short… my shoulder is com.. read moreHi Lisa
Thank you so much for your thoughtful review; yes life is short… my shoulder is coming along slowly; PT twice a week ( and sore after!) this is a long haul!
I hope you are stable with your knee… getting old isn’t fun! All the best to you!
😊🌷warmly, B🌹
My love of poetry results from my love of art. As a painter I am able to express myself on a canvas. As a poet my words come from my heart, my moods, sometimes sad, mostly upbeat. I like to use vivid .. more..