Ran Away

Ran Away

A Poem by Tania
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It has been a long time
Hasn't it ?
Everything has changed.
The truth sounds different.
The love he once lived upon has
detached from his soul.
The sky  has become further to reach.
The stars are not clear to be seen.
It has been a long time
since living felt like the wind
was calling for his name
and the roads  awaiting
for his footsteps.
He closes his eyes,
time has overtaken him ,
but experience has made him
a survivor ,
a lover.
He has become an old man
sitting on the chair

with stories to tell,
and laughter to share.
A human whom loved his world ,
is now ending his presence  with it.
Finally reaching to a place he never stepped upon,
a place far away from it all ,
a place he might call home.
 This world is simply letting go,
of all the beautiful souls.
They have lived bountifully and beautifully .
They have loved passionately,
ran miles of pain exasperatedly,
fought the hardest battle courageously. 
With time ,
one might say
the world stops becoming their friend.
So ,
the sun seems colder,and
the moon darker.
It is like happiness has escaped,
so these souls went ahead
and ran away with it.


   
                            

© 2015 Tania


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A hard lesson told in the poetry.
"the sun seems colder,and
the moon darker.
It is like happiness has escaped,
so these souls went ahead
and ran away with it."
Learning loss and release of people and old things. A lesson, all of us must learn. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


Tania

5 Years Ago

thanks once again for pending :)
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome.
a very well written piece.... the picture at the end makes this poem even more beautiful....

Posted 5 Years Ago


Tania

5 Years Ago

Thanks a lot :)
Excellent use of wording and imagery. Very creative. Well done.

~peace, Todd

Posted 5 Years Ago


Tania

5 Years Ago

Thanks- Todd
Sun seems colder and moon darker. A excellent description of times when everything just goes wrong and nothing fits in. Well though my friend... Nice flow :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Tania

5 Years Ago

Thank you ...
Really good piece of writing.It really appealed to me.Explained your thoughts on the last phase of life nicely....keep up the good work.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Tania

5 Years Ago

I am glad you enjoyed it , thank you
This is an awesome write my friend... love your thoughts! Good work!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Tania

5 Years Ago

Thanks, much appreciated..:)

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Tags: transcend, soul, change, old, world, life

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Tania
Tania

Menton, Beirut, France



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