A Girl's story-2

"Akshata.... Are you okay ...?"......
Akshata could see people crowded around her. Sharanya, Head of the department, classmates, everyone surrounded her. She was bit shy when she found herself lying on a bed , in college guest room.
"Everyone , please don't make her feel uneasy... Let her rest for a while." It was DR.sharma .
When all left, it was only DR.sharma and akshata in the room.
" Hello pretty girl... How are feeling now?"
It was the doctor who spoke. Akshata was little relaxed now, she could only give a smile . "Well, let me give you some flashback... Today morning you were found unconscious in your classroom during the lecture. So , I was called by your principal. He requested me to look over you. " ... By this time akshata could recollect everything slowly.
"Iam DR.radhika sharma, " doctor introduced herself with a smile.
" Hello madam"... Akshata replied.
she was feeling a bit consoled by sharma's pleasant smile.
They had a friendly talk , with a cup of tea. Mrs.sharma was very friendly to her.
"Then, young lady. What was wrong with you today. You had a terrible shock , and got unconscious. Let me know , please feel free".
Akshata opened up slowly.. she spoke out things that worried her.
Dr.sharma found little worried. " Shall I speak to that faculty?"...
Akshata gave a puzzled look. Later she agreed.
It was already 6:00 pm. The doctor dropped akshata to her home. She met her parents and informed them about everything. Finally they decided to meet that lecturer next day morning.
Akshata couldn't sleep that night. But was feeling secure now.
That morning akshata 's parents Mr and Mrs thripathi accompanied with the doctor , along with the faculties had a small get together. The new faculty was told that they just want to meet all faculties and it was his turn now.
It was arranged in the same guest room of the college, with permission of college administration and all faculty. Everyone wished, the thing get sorted out easily.

Akshata was also called now. When she entered the guest room , she could find everyone. But .. the GUY was missing... She looked at the lecturer carefully.. it was not H..I...M.......
She sat near her parents., And could not control herself now.
"Excuse me sir, are you the new faculty?"...
Everyone gave strange look at akshata now. The faculty answered with a frightened look " yes ... Iam. Don't you remember me?"....
" This guy is not him.... How could this happen?.... " Akshata whispered to DR.sharma....
Doctor got something in her mind now!...

To be continued.....

Reviews

[Ankit Miglani]

The suspense never dies in the story. The presentation of the plot is cleverly done. And ofcourse you can highlight the major things in thr lines without this" H..I..M " .
But again i liked the part very much. Looking forward for the next one. Well done.

[Bhagyashree Bhat]

Thank u very much... :)

[samparks,sam]

I like the feeling of this story

[Sikandar Khan]

so Nice And Confusing Suspense Continues Who Is Mystery Man?What Is Her Relation To Him?What Connection?Waiting For 3rd Part.....

[Bhagyashree Bhat]

Thanks for your review... :)

[Sikandar Khan]

Welcome And Waiting For Next

[Poeticme]

Well you have me hooked now my lady, once again well written, now I'm waiting on the next chapter, thanks for sharing

Poeticme

[Bhagyashree Bhat]

Thanks for your kind words... :)

[Poeticme]

Your very welcome my lady, it's my pleasure

Poeticme

[APOORVA]

the story is on, it makes a powerful connect with a reader and able to let make a picture.
well written, apart from some grammatical mistakes at some places.

" This guy is not HIM.... How could this happen?.... " Akshata whispered this in the ears of doctor.
Doctor got something flashed in her mind now....

if you write in capital to stress, it doesn't make that sense in a story, better be in same flow.

a very happening story, waitign for the next part asap. keep up this beautiful writing

[Bhagyashree Bhat]

Thank you ... I will go through it...
Iam very happy for your support :)

[wordman]

this is interesting,it flowed really well,almost like a true story

[Bhagyashree Bhat]

Thank u friend ...
I have posted part-1 of this before...plz read that also...hope u like it

[wordman]

you are welcome,i read part of it but i didn`t read it all and didn`t comment

[Bhagyashree Bhat]

Oh...is it ... Thanks for reading and supporting ..:)

[wordman]

my pleasure and i finished part one