YOUNG BLOOD

BORN FROM A BLOODY WAR AND FLOOD
RESURRECTED FOR WHAT
JUST TO GIVE IT ALL UP
FIGHT YOUNG ONE'S
SO MUCH BLOOD HAS BEEN LOST
REMEMBER WHO YOU ARE AND KNOW THAT
FAITH IS THE THINGS HOPED FOR & THE EVIDENCE OF THINGS NOT SEEN
THIS FLOOD
IS A WAY TO CLEAN OUT THOSE WHO PREY
ON THE WEAKER HUMAN BEING
80 MILLION OF YOU
STILL AWAITING TO BLOOM
A PLANT CANT DO MUCH
LACKING LIGHT,  DIRTY,  WATER AND GOD








SO CONTINUE TO FIGHT
YOUNG BLOOD
 TIL  YOUR WAR CRIES ARE HEARD

Author's Note

A FRIEND ASKED ME TO WRITE ON BANGLADESH THIS COUNTRY IS UNDER ATTACK FROM FAMINE, CORRUPTION , FLOOD OVER 6O% OF THIS ARE THE AGE OF 24 AND YOUNGER THIS COUNTRY BEGAIN TO FIGHT FOR ITS INDEPENDENCE IN 1971 TONS OF BLOOD SHED TIL A FLOOD CAME AND BACKED THE ATTACKING FORCES UP LATER DOWN THE LINE AIDE ARRIVED AND HELPED TO END THIS WAR. EVEN AIDE FROM A FEW CONCERTS BY LEON RUSSEL WAS HEALED TO HELP. BUT STILL THERE WAS MORE FIGHTING TO BE FOUGHT SO NEVER STOP FIGHTING THE POWER OF WATER CAN FLUSH OUT THE BLOOD

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Your writing is sad, a tragedy of words and deserves recognition. If self-help shows results then, it deserves support and conscientious assistance.

Bangladesh is certainly one of the world's countries that deserves aid, not just once in a while when the conscience pricks, but in continued support via different channels. By contacting and contributing to the Red Cross or similar organisations, church or a humane society on a regular basis - even a couple of hours a month, things can be done.

Most people walking this earth have troubles, that's the awfulness of modern day life, but some have hell on earth .. best hold out willing thoughts and hands than shrug and turn away ..

Thank you for writing your post, hopefully many people will read it and also, think for a second on the comments others have left.

[Betweenthekeys]

Simply stated and yet extremely poignant.. I like your style.

[Nirmala]

Very moving, very inspirational. An important write for all of us. A great way to share the pain and suffering of people across the globe in just a few verses!

[Sakib]

Well, I'm a Bangladeshi. What you've written here is absolutely true. We got independence 40 years back but we're still fighting against all sorts of adverse situation. I really appreciate how you have shown affection for our country here. The picture here is also appropriate. The little girl with saline packet in her mouth swimming in the flood water to carry it to his house to prevent diseases. This is how we are still fighting for surviving. Nice write.

[StarSandwich]

Sad and tragic, :/

[James Darrow]

A lot of truth and insight all expressed in a short, well constructed, and concise manner. Well done.

[Emily B]

thank you, for writing about those less fortunate . . . I'm glad someone invited me to these words

[Groovy]

Sorry, the use of all cap's is irritating enough, but the poem itself as a read is dull and cliched

[November Gold]

BRAVO on your incredible ability to express so much!

[Donna Lorenz]

The powerful truth of what is happening in this world. Good write

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Amazing review of the truth and powerfull lines. thanks a lot.