Nothing compares

Nothing compares

A Poem by BikerAngie


Sitting in my big bay window
Looking out at my white picket fence
Lined with rose bushes


Lush green yard
With two cherry trees in full blossom

The distant mountain tops still have lingering snow


The sun sets just beyond the horizon

Pinks, oranges, reds, and purples
Blending blending with the blue skies 


White and gray clouds fill in the blank places

The beauty surrounding this home of love
More fulfilling than the scenery


The children’s laughter fills the hallways
The smells of fresh baked cherry pies fill the rooms
Your cigar smoke drift and mingles in the air


All this beauty surrounds our lives
Yet none of it compares to the the love I fill for you

© 2012 BikerAngie


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Firstly, let me say, great imagery here. I could really visualise all that you wrote. Secondly, a couple of pointers, if I may? "Your cigar smoke drift and mingles in the air" - to me would sound better with "Your cigar smoke drifts and mingles in the air" and you've written "Yet none of it compares to the love i fill for you" - should that be "feel for you" or did you actually mean "fill"?
Aside from that, I enjoyed reading it. It had a nice flow.

Posted 7 Years Ago


beautifully written...liked it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Oh. Nothing compares a dougnut to...a...sprinkled doughnut? I dunno. That sentence I just wrote...was cheezy. T3T

Posted 8 Years Ago


It's very uniquely written and creative.

Posted 8 Years Ago


lovely write. this poem gives me a beautiful picture in my head :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very powerful and full of love. It's like beauty surrounding love.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Cute write!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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BikerAngie
BikerAngie

Deep Gap, NC



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I am 47 soon to be 48 years old and beginning a new journey, I have bought a salvage Gold Wing GL1500SE which I am rebuilding to join a motorcycle prison ministry. The bikes name is Born Again she wil.. more..

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