Folding Spring

Folding Spring

A Poem by William Michael Reeves
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Choka of origami inspired haiku

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spring wind sweeps forest
folding origami leaves
open in cloudless sky

valleys fold fresh life
pleated by cycles of sun
syncing in creased time

paper blossoms fruit
succulent forms harvested
petal folds with love

2023

© 2023 William Michael Reeves


Author's Note

William Michael Reeves
In origami there are valley folds, petal folds and sink folds, or in this case sync folds.

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That was nice or should I say, those were nice and I really enjoyed the thought of origami combined with nature. The patterns of nature are amazing as it is but to imagine what they could become if shaped by the right hands...well, there are many who will say that nature indeed is shaped by the right hands, but you know what I mean I believe. Like weaving nature into a beautiful poem and folding it to fit perfectly...just as you have done above. Nice one my friend.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

11 Months Ago

I distinctly remember responding to your review, but it doesn't seem to exist. I'll hit reply and no.. read more



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I can see the haiku influence in this one. In fact, what we have here are three separate haiku poems. I know little about origami, but I can see its techniques represented in every offering. It seems that in this art, folding is everything.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

6 Months Ago

Folding words is one of my favorite pastimes for sure. Thanks
artistic! nicely done William. :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


The title is stunning. Your reference to Origami so smart. The smell of seasons. Beautifully executed William.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

10 Months Ago

Titles do sometimes make or break a poem. Thank you. I'm stunned to hear you are stunned! I like tha.. read more
Gentle, wonderful and amazing words for Spring. I loved this poem and thank you Williams for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

10 Months Ago

It's a gentle breeze that folds spring. Thank you Cannis Poeticus
Spring's hidden beauty's scattered about waiting for us to find them.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

11 Months Ago

Spring's hidden beauties

Pardon me!
Cherrie Palmer

11 Months Ago

One syllable short- the story of my life :) the thought, just seemed to mirror your own.
William Michael Reeves

11 Months Ago

Don't worry, I had one to spare. I like that thought that we are like mirrors when we review poetry... read more
That was nice or should I say, those were nice and I really enjoyed the thought of origami combined with nature. The patterns of nature are amazing as it is but to imagine what they could become if shaped by the right hands...well, there are many who will say that nature indeed is shaped by the right hands, but you know what I mean I believe. Like weaving nature into a beautiful poem and folding it to fit perfectly...just as you have done above. Nice one my friend.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

11 Months Ago

I distinctly remember responding to your review, but it doesn't seem to exist. I'll hit reply and no.. read more
Petals in fact do look like origami paper flowers…..that do open up with grace….I like your soft textures and hues and fine imagery in this very scenic piece….nice!
Best, B

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

11 Months Ago

Thanks Betty. Seemed natural to combine origami with Japanese form. Glad you enjoyed the view!
Betty Hermelee

11 Months Ago

I did very much! and you're very welcome W.
Best, B
"creased time" is a perfect image you have created.
we love our art and it shows...so that others may love it as well.
j.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Michael Reeves

11 Months Ago

The sun does crease time. Enfolding life over and over. I think that is the best thing about writers.. read more

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Added on April 15, 2023
Last Updated on April 15, 2023
Tags: Origami, haiku

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William Michael Reeves
William Michael Reeves

Seattle, WA



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I live in Seattle. I have been a nurses aide most of my life and my experiences as a caregiver for people with disabilities has inspired much of my poetry. I love the puzzle of poetry. Expression with.. more..

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