The World of HeckA Story by Will DursensChosen to make a deal with hell, he turns the tablesBy Will
Dursens
As the dark
of the night began to brighten up once again, I noticed that the light was a
bit different than just the normal daylight as I had been used to. Instead of
being a light of brightness, the dark was opening to a hazing light that was
highlighted by a tint of red. It was then
I heard the incredibly rich, deep, powerful laugh that took over the quiet of
the moment. A laugh that was both incredibly enriching while at the same moment
a bit of intimidating. “Welcome to
the gateway to the grand world of HELL,” said the voice of the person coming to
view from within the haze. “I assume you must be Steven Hayswood?” Cautiously I
kept silent until I was hopefully able to view more of the individual behind
the voice, but unfortunately the haze would not lift enough to make a full view
of the person or thing with the voice. Instead, all I had was a rather tall,
maybe around six-feet-eight, well-muscled figure with a strangely sizable head
that was shaped like a disjointed triangle. “Well " are
you not who I said you were?” commanded the voice. I stood up
straight and took a hold of my emotions and tried to show strength and no
intimidation by responding, “If you already know who I may be than why would
you need to ask? And why if you are so immensely proud of this so-called
gateway to the world of hell are you hiding within a haze of illusion and
wonder?” Throwing his
arms across his chest in another attempt to present more of an intimidating
presence, the voice sternly noted, “Yep, they warned us that you do not shy
away from confrontations and can or will be a bit of a smart a*s in your
responses. I like that in a person. But I think you know why I already know who
you are as you are one that believes in either heaven or hell and it should be
obvious which gateway this is. This is no illusion, but truly the gateway to
the GRAND (he made sure to emphasis that he thought his domain was better)
WORLD OF HELL!” “Yes, I do
believe in heaven and hell,” I replied rather sternly. “So, if this is truly
hell, then why are you not revealing the opening to me in much more grandeur
way? Do I intimidate you?” That
response brought a hearty laugh in return before he spoke again, adding, “Why
should I be intimidated by you, do you think you are Jesus Christ himself? I do
not think so. But I will say that word is " you are a borderline candidate for
the grand world of hell and I, as my brother’s keeper, have been ordered to
give you the opportunity to turn back and avoid all the wonders, the joys, the
embellishment as well as the harsh standards of our world.” Now that
information raised questions in my mind, like what did I do in life to end up
so close to the walkway of hell and so distant from the glories of heaven? After taking
a moment to gather my thoughts I again sternly responded by saying, “Nope,
Jesus Christ I am not, and it isn’t even close as he was and always will be one
of a kind to represent the glories of heaven. While I am very much aware that
my life did not go as I had hoped or planned, and yes, while I did not lean or
discuss my walk with the glory of the above, I was hoping that I could still
walk through into the glory of heaven by the hope I always tried to embellish,
the faith for which I never let out of my grasp and heart, the love I shared with
so many that traveled my life journey with me and the grace for which I was
given through the words of the great spirits.” Those words
must have hit a chord with the man in the haze as I saw his hands throw up into
the air before grasping his head around his ears as if in pain. “Damn you Haywood,”
shouted the voice. “You are just what they say you would be and that means you
are just too solid a person to enter our hollow gateway of hell because if you
did you would intimidate too many and possible throw the whole scheme of hell
out of balance.” With that I
just stood as tall as I could and threw a huge smile of confidence back at him. “Because of
those truths which you speak of, my brother, the king of hell, has instructed
me to give you an opportunity to help us deal with borderline crossovers like
you,” added the voice. As I brought my hands together to my chin almost as if I was entering a moment of prayer or meditation, I then drew them outward toward the voice, pointed all fingers and thumbs his way as I gave him another stern word, “Ok, then what is it that I may be of help to you and the world of hell as you see it? What could I possible help you with that would even remotely help both you folks from hell as well as the glories of the Great Spirits?” “We want to strike a deal with those Great Spirits as you call them by giving folks like you to another avenue of their first steps of afterlife,” explained the voice in a much more subdued tone than previous. “We would call it the World of Heck. You know like that phrase so many like to use in the earthly world " ‘how the heck did I get here’.” I took a
step back as the idea seemed to be so organized and so out of the ordinary for
what many the whole concept of hell normally entails. Never in my time of study
about heaven and hell would I have ever considered a deal being made as if they
were politicians in Washington. “Okay, so
let us say that I might be interested in the idea of helping,” I slowly spit
the words out even as I thought of just how un-godly it seemed to be that I
would be in any way helping anyone from hell. “Just what would it be that you
want me to do?” Putting his
hands on his waist, the figure representing the voice continued his plea by
saying, “We are willing to give those folks that may be some what like you
another opportunity. Let us call it a get out of hell card.” “What, you are attempting to make heaven and hell like a game of monopoly? I would think there is a whole lot more at stake than just some fictitious names of streets and play money.” Sounding a bit more witchy now, the voice added, “Oh it would indeed put a lot at stake for those individuals. But even us in the grand world of hell know what a pain in the a*s a slightly more ‘goodie two shoes’ is than a ‘hell raising devil type’ can be when they enter our enduring world. We just want to, let us say give them a second chance, an opportunity to right some wrongs so they can end up spending eternity in a world they are better suited or deserve than what we would have instore for them.” “So, what
you are asking is for me to give you directions for like a mid-world to work
with, where one can see where they went astray and then show what kind of an
individual they really are than what they seem to appear from an outer view?” Now smiling,
the voice responded, “Exactly. You are already heading in the right direction.
Just give us a game plan on what would determine how one would end up in heck
instead of going straight to hell while also giving us several ways for which
we can punish or establish them for falling in the middle? Ways for which the
final decision could be made as to whether they end up in what many of you call
the glories of heaven or spending eternity enjoying the grand self-absorbing world
of hell.” Now the
concept is a highly interesting direction of thought and viewpoint, but what would
in it for the leaders of hell for such a spot to be even considered as the hell
for which I have read or studied did not seem to be so cooperative, but instead
would be jumping on anyone who fails in life and falls anywhere close to the
gateway to their world. “Oh, I think
the idea or concept of a mid-world sort of destination not only is a good one, but
it could also be one that already exists and maybe we just do not know it yet,”
I noted with a noticeably confident tone in my voice. “I think the question I
should be asking first is, just what does the world you claim is so wonderful
get out of such an idea?” Within the
haze I could see that this body, this thing with the voice understood my
question and knew I had a strong point to be made. “Yep, you
Steven Hayswood are just what we expected when we got the latest list of
possible arrivals to our world and with that, I do believe that you already
know the answer but just want me to admit to the possible idea that those borderline
arrivals have become a nuisance. They seem to find that strength of faith and
hope that so many felt they had wandered away from in the world of the living,
and then use that strength to combat all the self-absorbing, greedy, lustful
opportunities that come their way in our world, making it miserable upon the
leaders of our world to get their duties done without worrying about others
turning on them as well.” Got him is
what I thought as I listened to his words, I knew that those many borderline
believers in the high standards of faith, hope, love, and grace taught to us by
the Great Spirits may have slipped through the cracks of our world but at the
final moment of eternal destiny may have found that strength once again that
comes from utmost belief in the leadership of the Great Spirits. The voice
continued, “Yep, I can see in your face and body that you think you got me, but
don’t be so sure about that. One of the reasons one ends up at the gateway to
our grand world of hell is by being selfish or humanly weak, by caving in to
urges that block the unselfish, actions of belief your so-called Great Spirits
require. Our issue is of those who caved into those urges and suffered but may
have realized the error in their ways and maybe were working on correcting them
before the issue of eternity pulled their name up and put them on the dividing
road between the two worlds of hell and heaven.” With that I
had to point out something which I grew to believe, noting, “So, you do
understand that even though one has fallen to those urges of selfishness, greed
and more, they can still redeem themselves when they see and understand the
true benefits of holding on to faith, hope, love and continually reaching for
grace which is our true ticket to heaven.” For the
first time, what I could make out of the face to the voice began to present a
look of not so much defeat but disappointment. I continued
by adding, “If you want a level in between our two worlds of eternity, this
so-called world of heck would be appropriate if heck stood for the following:
1. H " would be HOPE for redemption; 2. E " would be for the EFFORT to ask for
forgiveness; 3. C " would stand for the COMFORT we get knowing that Grace is
always available from the Great Spirits; and 4. K " obviously stands for the
KNOWLEDGE that the love from the Great Spirits is unconditional and highly
forgiving.” Now the face
of the voice bent downward with a frustrating look of near defeat, as he did
not seem happy with the reflection of expectations and direction our entire
discussion seemingly took. Raising his
head slowly, the voice readied with a response to my chat and as he twisted his
neck with wrenching sounds of bones cracking, he said, “You are a true believer
in the Great Spirits for which guard all living things with such crazy love and
grace. You, Steven Hayswood, are truly the kind of individual spirit that
should not be anywhere close to our grand gateway to hell. You should have been
the user of the abilities you had to convey those traits so treasured by the
Great Spirits and so despised by the selfish, greedy, lustful leaders of our
world of glory.” As he spoke,
I realized he knew me, he knew my travels of life, he knew that at one point in
my life I turned away from the travels of pastoring because of fear that I
could not live up to the expectations of my predecessors like my father and
grandfather, he knew. Before I
could reply, the voice raised his left arm and pointed the palm of that
wickedly abstracted hand of his as if to say stop, “Do not finish following
your thoughts as I know those fears you felt so many years ago. Those fears
that you let turn your life down a road of constant distractions and
disruptions. Those fears for which along the way you confronted but never
forgave, but now it seems that forgiveness has arrived for you and your soul.
Let your soul be treasured by the Great Spirits as they deserve you much more
than you deserve to enter our gates of hell.” With that I
knew I had defeated the keeper of this gateway to hell and with a smile I left
him with a suggestion, “That is true, my fears were allowed to overtake my life
and the road I followed to the point that fear overshadowed ever opportunity I
may have had to lead others with my Great Spirit style of living. So, with this
I tell you ‘Shalom’ and maybe I will become the caretaker of that world in
between, the one you want to call heck, so that I can truly show those
individuals on the borderline as you call it, the true differences to enjoying
the glories of love in heaven as to the grand illusions you call hell and save
them in their final moments before entering the non-returnable road of eternity.” With those
words, the body with the voice began to shudder and I could hear a painful
sounding growl growing from within until…… GOOD
MORNING, THE TIME IS 7:30 A.M. and IT IS TIME TO RISE AND SHINE FOR ANOTHER DAY
OF EARTHLY SUNSHINE, BLUE SKIES AND ENOUGH WIND TO BLOW YOUR SOCKS OFF. I shook my
head, relaxed for a moment before opening my eyes and realizing that yes I had
been blessed with another day of opportunities on this gift I call earth,
opportunities to enjoy the love, faith, hope and grace found with a life of
true belief while taking a short moment to exclaim much relief that maybe it
was only a really intense, dream - one which, if fortunate, I will not visit
again anytime soon. But then again maybe it was a new awakening, guess I have
given my soul and mind something to consider and work on, but for now I am
ready for some toast and orange juice. (Copyright@2021, CrossDove Writers/Will Dursens) © 2021 Will Dursens |
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Added on June 20, 2021 Last Updated on June 20, 2021 Tags: hell, spirituality, faith, hope, love, grace, selfishness AuthorWill DursensKSAboutFreelance Writer who has experience in newspapers and media work......write a variety of things more.. |