Forget Me Girl

..i posted this before.. but it's my favorite..

Forget me I’m that girl

The girl who lost her way

In a big dream

Who fell into darkness

A living nightmare

What happened?

What made her change?

Who erased her from life?

Who took her away from living?

Why was she driven away?

Forget her

Maybe she never really existed

Maybe she was a dream

Or who’s to say

That she wasn’t just a nightmare?

It could have been a storm

Raging and alluring

But we’ve all forgotten her

Sick, sick…She’s sick

Broken and lost

Who will help her?

Who will save her?

Will they further condemn her?

You can’t save someone who isn’t real

Someone who has a heartbeat

And has a pulse

But doesn’t exist

Not anymore

It took a long time

But they helped her into the shadows

Helped her to disappear

Fueled her sickness

Forget me. I’m her

Forget who you thought I was

Forget who you knew

She is no more

 

Reviews

[Kiddx]

WOW! This is an amazing write here

You can't save someone who isn't real
Someone who has a heartbeat
And has a pulse
But doesn't exist
Not anymore
It took a long time
But they helped her into the shadows
Helped her to disappear

Loved these lines laot, this is a well written write, full of emotion and heart, will written.

[Katie]

Its nice, creative, emotional.. Such an amazing poem

[Sseoni]

Interesting poem! I loved it! It was very well written, wonderfully detailed, and greatly descriptive! It was very moving and powerful! Fantastic poem! I really enjoyed reading it! :D

[Fairy Tales]

this was very nice and ceative.

[Miss K. Minilla]

this is really good, one of my favorites

[Wildecat]

That is a powerful line you can't save someone who isn't real. Wow a fabulous poem.

[Alaina]

Wow i really like this, its amazing! Your a really great writer keep up the excellennt work.
:)
-Thanx for sharing!

[alyssa]

i really do like this...its soo good!! keep writing!!