Eleven Things + 1

Eleven Things + 1

A Chapter by Blue Bird II

What is to come?


Eleven things,

very simple things.

To say my wishes

so just you listen.



very void and scary.


for love and mary.


Winter ends,

as March begins.

But thats when

the challenge is in.


April brings promise,

like a new day.

But my challenge is over

so it must be May.


Its coming soon,

the freedom of June.

Now we all rely

on the fires in July.


Come August,

We couldn't be the wrongest

people in the letter

for school in September.


Its October,

the fun is all over.

We have to get better

before November.


Eleven years,

since 2000.

Eleven months

'till our drowning.


The Eleven Things,

not so simple things.

Simply controlled

by the solar rings.


One plus one,

Eleven is done.

One more month

'till the burnin' suns.

© 2011 Blue Bird II

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Good writing style, very clean and to the point. Nice Job.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Just amazing. I loved this to death. Amazing. I can't say that enough.

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Added on February 11, 2011
Last Updated on February 14, 2011
Tags: poems, poem, poetry, Eleven, Things, +, 1, 2011, 2000, simple, blood cloud


Blue Bird II
Blue Bird II

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