Picture Perfection

Picture Perfection

A Poem by CagedBIRDsings

"Not good enough"
"A diamond in the rough"
Thats what they all say
To lead you astray

Close your ears and open your eyes
It's not a surprise that they were all lies
You're already a diamond, gorgeous flaws
Beautiful blemish, Follow no laws

Goldilocks says it's to hot
Goldilocks says it's to cold
What she doesn't know
Is that she is no hero

There will always be
Those who don't agree
Don't be tricked
Into chains called "PERFECT"

Picture Perfection
....Spreading infection

© 2011 CagedBIRDsings


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Hey, This is really Good! I enjoyed this piece. Everything just falls into place as you read it. (Very nicely written)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love your message! Just one quick note - in the verses regarding Goldilocks, it should be 'too' instead of 'to'. Other than this, I enjoyed reading it (I do have a soft spot for rhyming..). :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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CagedBIRDsings
CagedBIRDsings

Stony Brook, NY



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I'm young but I'm strong. Poetry is a passion of mine and I love to write in my spare time. Some other things I like are blue skies,a perfectly sharpened pencil, crisp apples , bird song, good music, .. more..

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