My Girl

For my fiance Lydia. For the bad times i am sorry, for the good I love you more.

Love set sail 

Upon a shaking sea

I got down

On a stumbling knee

Drunk as the night

I gave you my heart

Later that year

I fed you a dart

I told you a secret

from my rusty mind

you wiped away tears 

And left me behind

Now we are better

All wounds have sealed

The love we once known

Was once again healed.

My Girl. 

Author's Note

This is my first SERIOUS try at poetry, i have never studied it, i just know alot of people rhyme in poems, i hope its ok. it is the story of me and my fiance.

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

It is quite good. You don't have to rhyme, and rhyming can actually be quite tricky, so give yourself a back pat.

[BlakeDuckers]

Thank you again my friend 'Pats own back'