Day

watch out, this is dark...

Day

 

Just a day

Just an ordinary day

Trying to get by

Trying to run

 

Run before you can fly

Try again, try again

No harm, no faul

If you pretend

 

If running can save you no more

It’s time to close the door

Because if you can’t run

You will never fly

 

Not low,

But neither ever high

So take a knife

And start to feel

 

The pleasure of running will then be real

But once will be a time you have to stop

Stop running, your mind will be blocked

Keep running, you will fly

 

Everything is better from above the sky

There will be no pain

As long as it rains

So let it rain, let it rain

Blood will then, make no stains

Reviews

[∂αʌ<..]

remind me of a song...An Ordinary Day by Vanessa Carlton!
a lovely poem!

[BrynnaW.]

An excellent poem. Thanks for the RR! I really enjoyed reading it. Keep on writing!

[amdc101]

Wow, that was dark, but good write!

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem flowed like music. It had a hard edge on the poem. I don't like to cut myself. I do believe pain can bring some sort of peace. I like the ending to this excellent poem. You create a wild vision with strong words and description.
Coyote

[deeps]

Yes I agree this is chilling, but written so well

[Tasha]

A chilling piece indeed, but I loved it.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[TheElfPrincess]

A chilling piece of writing, I loved it. Well done.

[Liz]

oh wow, I love this. definitely glad I came across your profile, love your writing!

[alexis]

thats a lil spine chiller

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Some chilling lines here, nice stuff!!!