Be my Valentine Baby!

Be my Valentine Baby!

A Poem by Curiosity and Black Angel

 
Be My Valentine Baby!


Would you be my valentine?
For twenty-four hours cause that’s all I need.
 
We could do anything, the sky is the limit.
We could share a breakfast filled
with waffles and chocolate chip pancakes.
 
We could walk through the park,
hand in hand, showing the world that we love each other.
 
We could picnic by the beach.
I could make heart-shaped sandwiches without the crusts just like you prefer
and we could listen to the water graze the beach sand.
 
We could talk for hours about anything you’d like.
I could read you one of my love poems
or you could tell me about your dreams and aspirations.
 
We could have a candlelit dinner under the starlit night’s sky.
The gentle breeze of the night brushing through your hair.
 
We could make the most passionate love either of us thought was achievable.
We could make love on a thousand red rose petals.
 
We could finally say those three words that have lingered on the tip of our
 
tongues all day long as we watch the next day’s sunrise… I love you!

© 2009 Curiosity and Black Angel


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I was enticed by your words...wow lol..I loved it..
It had desire, lust, emotions, and sweetness! a great combination for a great poem..
I think any girl reading this would feel special by these words ecspecially if they were written for just her...
I enjoyed this it was a sexy valentines day poem...

Well From One Word-Play Poet To The Next...Always Remember To Write With Your Heart!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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too cute! ---mishel

Posted 12 Years Ago


I was enticed by your words...wow lol..I loved it..
It had desire, lust, emotions, and sweetness! a great combination for a great poem..
I think any girl reading this would feel special by these words ecspecially if they were written for just her...
I enjoyed this it was a sexy valentines day poem...

Well From One Word-Play Poet To The Next...Always Remember To Write With Your Heart!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

if this was the first love poem i have ever read, i would love it, but unfortunately it's not. it's well written, but it's just been done before. and i know people are gonna hate me or whatever, but fam, this poem encompasses too many know cliches about a romance poem. from picnics, to holding hands, to beaches, and rose petals. it's just to much man. originality is key.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very romantic. A perfect Valentine poem. If it were me I would choose the chocolate chip pancakes. m-m-m-m!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is sexy! I looove it!

Really cute...tellin us what u'd do to make that day that much more special.

I personally dont favour valentines day because of past experiences and stuff..but if this poem was for me, I'd definitely consider!
I really like this write...it feels so special...very romantic...choice of words was brilliant..wow!

thatnx for sharing hun! for real!

God bless!

~~BlessedLove~~;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes poet, I will be your valentine! (smiling)

I love this write!


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww! This is so very cute! Like a Valentine's Day checklist! All the things a couple should want to do on this lovely day. It is very good work and makes my soul smile.
^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awww, what a sweet poem. I really liked it. It explores some of the most simple tokens of love that one can receive. It's the simple things that really mean a lot...well for me anyway. Very romantic.

LivyJ

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awww i love this poem it's so pretty!


Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Curiosity and Black Angel
Curiosity and Black Angel

Long Beach, CA



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My name is Charles and I began writing when I was nine years old. Oh, yes! It all began with mystery stories inspired by the Sherlock Holmes tales. Now I specialize in romance fiction. I have two publ.. more..

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