Commandments

Commandments

A Poem by Black_Oxygen

Ten   Commandments   of   Real   Love

 

 

I.  Your  concern  for  the  one  you  love

    is  greater  than  for  yourself

 

 

II.   You  will  go  without  so  that  the

      one  you  love  will  not

 

 

III.   You  have  the  natural  desire  to  be  faithful

 

 

IV.   There  is  no  such  thing  as  sacrifice

 

 

V.   You  could  never  express  in  words  or  deeds:

     "you are  on  your  own"

 

 

VI.   There  is  no  such  thing  as  inconvenience

 

 

VII.   The  effort  to  satisfy  your  love's

         desires  and  needs  is primary

 

 

VIII.  Intentions  are  always  honorable

 

 

IX.   Your  efforts  to  be  supportive  are

       consistent  and  endless

 

 

X.   You  truly  believe  that  life  is  better  with

     the  one  you  love  than  without

 

 

             

        Ron  Harrell

 

© 2008 Black_Oxygen


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Now that you've handed down these commandments.
I will take them to heart, and with these words
lover's should never part.
This is a good write, I like the form.
the only thing missing is the visual of tablets,
hopefully made of pillows and not stone.
Incase you need to hit some people over the head with them.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Now that you've handed down these commandments.
I will take them to heart, and with these words
lover's should never part.
This is a good write, I like the form.
the only thing missing is the visual of tablets,
hopefully made of pillows and not stone.
Incase you need to hit some people over the head with them.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this one a lot Ron, a real nice perspective that should be a part of the marriage vows.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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