D.E.S.P.E.R.A.T.I.O.N.

D.E.S.P.E.R.A.T.I.O.N.

A Poem by Ethale Captor
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Can you find the meaning of the title in the poem?

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Dear, my love, my love,

Ease your frightening fears

Stop all of your worrying

Please dry up your tears

Everything will be fine

Really, I needed to go

Although I really cared,

This time, I must say no

I know you’ll be ok without me

Oh, please, do not cry

No, I know you loved me, but I must say goodbye

© 2013 Ethale Captor


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to answer your author's note, yes I did. The last four lines were my favorite, because you emphasized what I interpreted to be the final stand. No turning back, because you've already made your choice to leave, though it was a hard choice, but you think that person might be better off.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethale Captor

8 Years Ago

Thank you for such an excellent review.
RachelReaper

8 Years Ago

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oh how ive come to love acrostics. youve done a great job here, being so desperate to be missed, knowing theyd be ok without you. leaves one to actually think, im noticing that trend with you, and am enjoying it greatly. great work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ethale Captor

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Jack.
Very good acrostic. Suicide.....desperate to find peace yet knowing your leaving someone behind in DESPERATION!! Awesome work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ethale Captor

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
to answer your author's note, yes I did. The last four lines were my favorite, because you emphasized what I interpreted to be the final stand. No turning back, because you've already made your choice to leave, though it was a hard choice, but you think that person might be better off.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethale Captor

8 Years Ago

Thank you for such an excellent review.
RachelReaper

8 Years Ago

:)
-.- If only my mister would write such a goodbye. Although if he thought me desperate I'd laugh at him. This is interesting, I hope you didn't have to really deliver this message.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ethale Captor

8 Years Ago

The desperation is coming from the speaker. The speaker is desperate for the loved one to miss them... read more
I love this! But I love all you poems...still this is awesome, meow. =3

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ethale Captor

8 Years Ago

Thank you.
great job:) loved it:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


marie

8 Years Ago

so your admitting you get things wrong?
Ethale Captor

8 Years Ago

Who isn't wrong every once in a while? I never said I was perfect.
marie

8 Years Ago

but you say you are the closest thing and you are right 99% of the time don't deny this you know its.. read more

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Ethale Captor
Ethale Captor

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