Never Gone

 

I’m letting go, I slip away.

Gone but still there,

Like a faded memory, a vanishing thought, an elusive feeling

Like the presence of a loved one passed on

Gone but still there.

 

I can’t hold on, I lose my way.

Gone but still there,

Like a mountain peak enveloped in a heavy mist

Like the sun in the dark of night

Gone but still there.

 

With your steps forward, I drift back.

Gone but still there,

Like a friend across continents, beyond an embrace

Like the paralyzing doubts I try to evade

Gone but still there.

 

With the passage of time,

To you I’m gone

but still there.

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i enjoyed how you used similes to describe how you felt and how you described EVERYTHING that you tried to describe, and real well i might add