Love - Theme 1

I tried my best to do this in a different way..forgive me if I fail.

Love - a feeling not so easily defined,

It is in every particle of life,

An endless spectrum of emotions,

Like a wondrous everlasting rainbow,

Illuminating our fragile existence,

Turning a path of darkened broken glass

Into a carpet of flowers, the colours of jewels.

LOVE

A red fiery passion consumes lovers,

A burning fire, a mind melting heat,

They share their bodies and entwine their spirits,

Love blooms intensely in their hearts,

Like a stunning stinging scarlet rose.

LOVE

 An orange glow embraces the love we came into the world with,

The sunrise of life. endless horizons, a fresh beginning,

All you see are endless fields of remarkable flowers,

No hatred, no concept of difference, 

An untainted soul.

LOVE

The love you have for your parents is incomparable,

A golden aura follows their every move,

Leaving stardust with each footprint,

The yellow light that surrounds them falls onto you like a sunbeam,

They are Kings and Queens, making kingdoms of our homes.

LOVE

Mother Earth is deserving of our sincerest adoration,

Bathed in emerald greens, natural, enchanting,

She cares not for race, nor gender, nor class,

She is all giving, and knows not how to judge,

And She teaches us how to live and love, if we'll let her

LOVE

True friendship has a touch of blue,

Serenity, belonging, the one who stays,

You share smiles, sadness, fights and laughter

And endure

Years intensify your loving bond,

You would give them anything, and forgive them everything

LOVE

Indigo, a unique and intense colour,

It is the uniqueness the betrothed see in one another,

It matters not which gender or colour waits by the altar,

The man will still stand and sweat with nerves,

With the most exquisite love in his heart,

Whether it be his bride or groom that approaches.

The woman still feels cupid's butterflies in her stomach,

as she dedicates her life to her husband or wife.

LOVE

All these different threads of love,

Make up the beautiful tapestry  of life itself.

Share and preserve these precious bonds,

Violet ties, deep and intense,

Pay it forward and forward again,

True peace only comes to those that practice,

Not those that believe with no works to show.

LOVE

A rainbow does not need just rain to shine,

It is the sun that truly shows it's radiance,

You too must spread your colours,

In your heart, your home, your mind, your soul,

Your street, your town, your country,

Your planet.

Our planet.

See it in the sky and feel it in the wind,

It is all around us, 

Let the scales of misguided hate fall from your eyes,

And see.

Author's Note

A bit of a long one, sorry :P Theme 1 of 50

Reviews

[Reshma]

Beautiful :)
You have captured all forms of love around us...
The beauty in them the ferocity in them and the need to preserve them.
All lines are beautiful but these are splendid
Turning a path of darkened broken glass
Into a carpet of flowers, the colours of jewels.

Love and only Love can do that
Great work my friend and this ofcourse this goes to my favourites :)..

[BlaqkShadow]

Thanks so much hun, you are too kind to me :)

[Writergurl]

The man will still stand and sweat with nerves,
With the most exquisite love in his heart,
Whether it be his bride or groom that approaches.
The woman still feels cupid's butterflies in her stomach,
as she dedicates her life to her husband or wife.

Such awesome lines here, this is amazing yet beautiful
so nicely written and expressed in each color

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of description. I liked how you defined the words love. Each worthwhile and true. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[BlaqkShadow]

Thank you darling! XxXx

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[D Kamdar]

Would overrate the efforts and the poem overall. It us very pleasing.I'd suggest only onething, that ,if uou rhyme the lines , it'd win all the minds!Have a great day

[BlaqkShadow]

Thank you hun! XxXx

[Firebird]

I love that. Nicely written and the overall effect is beautiful. Great message at the end!

[BlaqkShadow]

Thank you friend! X

[Pryde Foltz]

Great concept and verse development. For me there is unconditional love born out of the connection of living things share and awareness of that connection. Wonderful work, here.

[BlaqkShadow]

Thanks for reading I'm glad you liked it it means a lot :D

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

this is beautiful, my friend, i love it!!!!

[BlaqkShadow]

Thank you so much :)

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

welcome!!!! :)