Good Morning

Written January 21, 2014 http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=536400 For DJ

           

Baby, wake up...  I wanna hear your voice. Sweetheart, wake up... Can you make a noise? A whisper... A murmur... Or maybe a sigh... Oh how I wish that I could gaze into your eyes... Just to turn over for once and have you there... Peeking through the stillness is my curiosity ensnared... Your breathing concocting and mingling with mine... The sunlight creeping up along your face through such unsettled blinds... Revealing a calmness of far away places written across your face... Me wanting to travel within your mind at a slow but rapidly steady pace... Can I take in the things that ignite... In your eyes... A sparkle? And may I see the things that send you sprawling into locked rooms with debacle? Including the things that swiftly or even slowly bring raindrops and tears? I'd like for you to wake up and still dream of me for years... Just knowing that I'll be around... Just wanting me here... Allocate your lighthearted moments and heavily latent thoughts my dear... And when I see that you're stirring.. As soon as your eyes lazily begin fluttering.. I'll quickly close my thoughts and secure my silent notions... Inhaling and exhaling my fascination in slow motion... As I take in your presence so sweetly next to mine... Falling asleep and dreaming along side doubt's decline... I just want you to arise and fall each day with an irrefutable certainty... Of my desires for you as I tirelessly drift off into my thoughts ardently... Dreaming of your succulent whispers in my ear... And the giggles and smiles that would flow quickly to my heart's adhere... Please let me love you the silly ways I know how... You've peeped farther within myself than my heart should have allowed. With a yearning ear as well as pensive aspirations... At night... Close your eyes with deep- rooted considerations... As you fall away from consciousness and protrude reality... I'm arising with thoughts of you Attempting a fruitful vitality... There will be a night where I will fall asleep encased in your grasp... And a sunrise where I can watch as you awake and I laugh.. Cus I'm awkward and you're cute... Don't glare at me... I'll go mute... Can I keep you Deonté? I really do love you. No need for dismay... I really do want you... Just go to sleep darling; cus I'm waiting for a big a*s hug... Then wake up and remember that I'm still a fu**ing thug. I love you I love you Baby... I do. I gotta ask one more time... Babe... Can I keep you? I miss your voice... It's ok though because I can't speak. If I had a choice... I'd come see you once a week. I've begun to grow weary... You're special to me. Shhh to be with you? In time but surely... Just wish I could have written a better ending. Sweetheart... Wake up... Wake up... Babe? Baby? Wake up... *giggles* . . . Good Morning.

Author's Note

As of today 2/6/14... This is the first poem I've ever attached with music.
What do you think?
I'm going to make this a spoken word.

Reviews

[Angel Bird]

A wonderful write! Very special and unique. I just loved to read this. It feels so ...real what you created here. And the way you make a little stanza of every sentence gives each one even more impact. Great piece!
The music wonderfully accompanies the images you create. Excellent!

[Angel Criner]

Awe, yay! Thank you.
I was experimenting with the music... That means a lot to me.

[Sami Khalil]

A good song sounding. Bravo.................

[Angel Criner]

Thank you .........

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)............

[ConfuzzledKidd]

I love this. I was impressed by your approach. Very relatable

[Angel Criner]

Much appreciated and that's wonderful!

[magenta24uk]

Lovely. The music is so emotive it really goes well. I loved the read and found myself feeling many things as I read through. I wanted to start singing the words as they felt like a song. Just beautiful x

[Angel Criner]

Thank you lol appreciate it

[James Snaith]

Beautiful and heartfelt. Reads very nicely, and really catches you.

[Angel Criner]

Thank you... appreciate it.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

An endearing write, it felt so sincere from start to finish.

[Angel Criner]

Much appreciated... thank you.

[DonDuquette]

This is very nice, desire moves more pens than any hand could.

[Angel Criner]

This... is too true. Much appreciated.

[Linda alexander]

great write, expression of love splendid and rich, enjoyed it

[Angel Criner]

Much appreciated... thank you.

[Linda alexander]

You most welcome, take care

[Angel Criner]

You do the same.

[Kai Rollins]

So much love :3 I enjoyed. Brilliant rhyme scheme as well

[Angel Criner]

Appreciate you