Good Morning

Good Morning

A Poem by Angel Criner
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Written January 21, 2014 http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=536400 For DJ

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Baby, wake up... 
I wanna hear your voice.
Sweetheart, wake up...
Can you make a noise?

A whisper... A murmur... Or 
maybe a sigh...

Oh how I wish that I could gaze 
into your eyes...

Just to turn over for once and 
have you there...

Peeking through the stillness is 
my curiosity ensnared...

Your breathing concocting and 
mingling with mine...

The sunlight creeping up along 
your face through such 
unsettled blinds...

Revealing a calmness of far 
away places written across your 
face...

Me wanting to travel within 
your mind at a slow but rapidly 
steady pace...

Can I take in the things that 
ignite... In your eyes... A 
sparkle?

And may I see the things that 
send you sprawling into locked 
rooms with debacle?

Including the things that swiftly 
or even slowly bring raindrops 
and tears?

I'd like for you to wake up and 
still dream of me for years...

Just knowing that I'll be 
around... 

Just wanting me here...

Allocate your lighthearted 
moments and heavily latent 
thoughts my dear...

And when I see that you're 
stirring..

As soon as your eyes lazily 
begin fluttering..

I'll quickly close my thoughts 
and secure my silent notions...

Inhaling and exhaling my 
fascination in slow motion...

As I take in your presence so 
sweetly next to mine...

Falling asleep and dreaming 
along side doubt's decline...

I just want you to arise and fall 
each day with an irrefutable 
certainty...

Of my desires for you as I 
tirelessly drift off into my 
thoughts ardently...

Dreaming of your succulent 
whispers in my ear...

And the giggles and smiles that 
would flow quickly to my 
heart's adhere...

Please let me love you the silly 
ways I know how...

You've peeped farther within 
myself than my heart should 
have allowed.

With a yearning ear as well as 
pensive aspirations...

At night...
Close your eyes with deep-
rooted considerations...

As you fall away from 
consciousness and protrude 
reality...

I'm arising with thoughts of you
Attempting a fruitful vitality...

There will be a night where I 
will fall asleep encased in your 
grasp...

And a sunrise where I can 
watch as you awake and I 
laugh..

Cus I'm awkward and you're 
cute...

Don't glare at me... I'll go 
mute...

Can I keep you Deonté?
I really do love you.

No need for dismay...
I really do want you...

Just go to sleep darling; cus 
I'm waiting for a big a*s hug...

Then wake up and remember 
that I'm still a fu**ing thug.

I love you
I love you
Baby...
I do.

I gotta ask one more time...

Babe... Can I keep you? 

I miss your voice... It's ok 
though because I can't speak.

If I had a choice... I'd come see 
you once a week.

I've begun to grow weary... 
You're special to me.

Shhh to be with you? In time 
but surely... Just wish I could 
have written a better ending.
Sweetheart...
Wake up...
Wake up...
Babe?
Baby?
Wake up...
*giggles*
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.
.
Good Morning.


© 2014 Angel Criner


Author's Note

Angel Criner
As of today 2/6/14... This is the first poem I've ever attached with music.
What do you think?
I'm going to make this a spoken word.

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A wonderful write! Very special and unique. I just loved to read this. It feels so ...real what you created here. And the way you make a little stanza of every sentence gives each one even more impact. Great piece!
The music wonderfully accompanies the images you create. Excellent!

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Angel Criner

7 Years Ago

Awe, yay! Thank you.
I was experimenting with the music... That means a lot to me.



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A good song sounding. Bravo.................

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel Criner

7 Years Ago

Thank you .........
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)............
I love this. I was impressed by your approach. Very relatable

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel Criner

7 Years Ago

Much appreciated and that's wonderful!
Lovely. The music is so emotive it really goes well. I loved the read and found myself feeling many things as I read through. I wanted to start singing the words as they felt like a song. Just beautiful x

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel Criner

7 Years Ago

Thank you lol appreciate it
Beautiful and heartfelt. Reads very nicely, and really catches you.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Angel Criner

7 Years Ago

Thank you... appreciate it.
An endearing write, it felt so sincere from start to finish.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Angel Criner

7 Years Ago

Much appreciated... thank you.
This is very nice, desire moves more pens than any hand could.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel Criner

7 Years Ago

This... is too true. Much appreciated.
A wonderful write! Very special and unique. I just loved to read this. It feels so ...real what you created here. And the way you make a little stanza of every sentence gives each one even more impact. Great piece!
The music wonderfully accompanies the images you create. Excellent!

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Angel Criner

7 Years Ago

Awe, yay! Thank you.
I was experimenting with the music... That means a lot to me.
great write, expression of love splendid and rich, enjoyed it

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel Criner

7 Years Ago

Much appreciated... thank you.
Linda alexander

7 Years Ago

You most welcome, take care
Angel Criner

7 Years Ago

You do the same.
So much love :3 I enjoyed. Brilliant rhyme scheme as well

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel Criner

7 Years Ago

Appreciate you

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