Before the Party

Before the Party

A Poem by Angel Criner
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I only wrote this for a school assignment... if you've grown familiar with my writing you'd know that this isn't my aura, lol. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=468235

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Her mind is like an upbeat child who sees delicious cakes;
Her mind is like a lukewarm breeze that passes with no breaks
Her mind is like a whoosh of chaos rising from the sea;
Her mind is shouting over everything, because she’s a bride to be.
 
Bring her a bowl of cream with fruit piled on the side;
Make her laugh and let her ponder the thought of who’s waiting inside;
Then oh so swiftly tuck her slim frame into the cloth that you weaved;
Because she’s about to enter the party, where she's a bride to be.

© 2014 Angel Criner


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Angel Criner
Honest commentary always welcome.

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Bring her a bowl of cream with fruit piled on the side;
Make her laugh and let her ponder the thought of who’s waiting inside;
well crafted dear....absolutely fine with pen. I am happy and where she's a bride to be.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel Criner

7 Years Ago

Aweee much appreciated and I'm glad.
Saddam

7 Years Ago

you're welcome dear.
very well written. it makes me feel like wow this lady is really in love. it reminded me of the avett brothers song january wedding

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel Criner

7 Years Ago

That's lovely... I might see what that song's about later, lol. Appreciated.
Nothing as sweet as being a bride after the hustles of planning for a wedding, you have brought out that feeling really well.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel Criner

7 Years Ago

Much appreciated... Lol, one day I'll get to experience this and hopefully only once.

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