have another Dream

I will dream of Paris
Wake up to live another pretense
I gat fantasy in excess
I gat you dressed as my princess
Child
Lovely and chilled
Have another dream to lead you to ecstasy
Yours may be a fantasy
But it should be beautiful like you
Maybe small
But it should be colorful with a summer blue
It should be as clear as day light
With you in all your darkest nights
It should be loud enough
To wake you up
Like un alarm would
Six o clock sharp
Been late won't be good
Whatever you do
Have one
If you can
Make it come true

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'have another Dream'
jayson,
To dream is so important to our being alive. The above words are full of hope and from this hope motivation to bring about the reality of a dream can be felt. Your use of color, "blue" and "lovely and chilled' and 'beautiful like you' are just a few of the words which bring such feeling to this piece. And last of all speaking into the future someone special to find..
."Whatever you do Have one if you can Make come true."
Lovely and hopeful.
Blessings,
Kathy