And This Is What He Told Me

And This Is What He Told Me

A Poem by Madelyn Defray
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Because his words mean so much

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He told me he loved me and I wasn't sure what to do

I took a couple of days, maybe one or two

I decided as final  that the best for it all

Would be to tell him everything before the fall

I professed my love, I professed my devotion

He turned away and he mocked my emotion

It goes without saying that when you let down your guard

 

The damn b*****d will tell you to put it on a hallmark card

 

 

© 2012 Madelyn Defray


Author's Note

Madelyn Defray
This is exactly what he told you and I just needed to release my anger. It's nothing special but I'm just so torn at the moment. Comment if you will

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I love the ending, Madelyn. There is nothing wrong with when writing in "the moment", and I think you pulled it off pretty well. Great job:)

-Cord

Posted 7 Years Ago


I actually really liked this piece. It's simple, but strong. The rhyming pattern was broken in one line, but that's really all. The last line is just priceless, good work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Madelyn Defray

7 Years Ago

It was meant to be broken, but thank you very much for commenting. I'm glad you liked it
Madelyn Defray

7 Years Ago

actually I take that back, there's a line that needs to be omitted. Thanks for pointing that out!

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Added on July 26, 2012
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Tags: broken, heartache, boyfriend, friend, friends with benefits, love

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Madelyn Defray
Madelyn Defray

Narnia, The Wardrobe, Canada



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I hate filling in the giant 'about me' information boxes because there really isn't anything special worth mentioning which of course leads to a blank box followed by the re-thinking of the sad, pathe.. more..

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A Poem by Madelyn Defray