Retribution

Retribution

A Poem by Sasha Leigh
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just a goof around with words :)

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I told him my secrets,

He fed me his lies.

My hate thickens,

As my love dies.

When he pushed for yes

And I said no.

I should have said never

Instead of going with the flow.

When it was time to say goodbye

I learned his fears.

I kept him from hurting others

By bringing him to tears.

© 2014 Sasha Leigh


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Had to return for a second read! luv it! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sasha Leigh

10 Years Ago

Aww. Thank you :)
UC Poika

10 Years Ago

I meant; your first love poem about him. Obviously it is well written.
I liked it. I thought it was very clever. This not your first at all, is it?

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sasha Leigh

10 Years Ago

NO :) But thank you!
It was so smooth and it sang to me. I visualized each part. Very well written. Sue Hart sent me to you, this is wonderful work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I absolutely love it. Put it to song, Sasha. This one is ready for the Grand ole' opry. The drama of the way she was treated is strongly put. You can feel her anger, frustration, and disgust. As usual, your writing aces the pile.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Emotional and the flow is very good. I like. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Well you took the high road...seems like you came out on top.

A good write...told the whole story in few lines.
Enjoyed it
Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sasha Leigh

10 Years Ago

Thank you :) It popped into my head the other night while I was trying to sleep and figured getting .. read more
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

I know that feeling ...
:)
Scott
Yes or No are affirmations of great consequences...Bravo.................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sasha Leigh

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).....................

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Added on January 6, 2014
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Sasha Leigh
Sasha Leigh

Western, Canada



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Reading and writing is my way of escaping the real world long enough to stay sane. All my life I've loved reading, whether it's for school in a text book or exiting life for a few hours in a novel.. more..


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