A Portrait

A Portrait

A Poem by ALifeAquatic
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No bloody idea, I quite like it though!

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A Portrait

 

The reading lamp,

How it fashioned him a halo.

Old balding head, grey

Illuminated with flickering light.

Wrinkles softened.

Yes, yes a kind light!

A holy man,

A Vicar.

Bible in his hands,

Gabriel by his sides.

A message!

Though I couldn’t hear what was said.

Uttered in whispers,

Drowned out by rattling,

The steady strum of a mandolin,

The low rumble of rock n roll drums

And the rickety racketing of,

“Box- Car after Box-Car.”

As long departed beatniks would say!

 

“Mummy, Mummy!”

 

My eavesdropping interrupted!

Eyes hid behind my paper.

Dated 08/02/10.

 

“Universities fear cuts in funding!

Ageing out of Control. Links found between

Genes and the ageing process.

Red Hot offers only on play.com”

 

Only a cross section of yesterday’s news!

Broadsheet only for show at any rate.

I much prefer tabloid tittle tattle,

 

“England Captain, caught playing away from home.

And not Strauss this time.

Priest caught in bar wearing skirt!

(If only Morrissey could see me snicker.

God fashions man after himself, but Adam

Takes it upon himself to fashion his wardrobe

After Eve’s.)                         

Such and Such a celebrity couple,

Only together for the Brand.”

Etc. Etc. Etc.

 

“Mummy, Mummy,”

The little girl she goes on pleading,

Little hands on her mother’s face.

“I think I think I’ve....”

While the carriage is caught in the grip of,

Trembling wheels,

Whining of a mandolin,

The steady beat of rock n roll drums,

The rickety racketing of Box- Car after Box- Car.

Bloody nosey b******s.

Eyes glued to the,

Dramatis persona-

Of mother and daughter.

 

“My feet are cold,

But I’m wearing four pairs of socks.”

 

The only way to combat the impending

Six inches of snow.

Two pairs of socks-

On top of,

Two pairs of socks.

 

Balding vicar softened by the,

Lamp.

Well now,

He is informing Gabriel of

Something.

Perhaps it is the presence of

Lucifer just beyond the threshold!

First class.

Only for ticket holders you know.

 

My, my, he has

Caught me ogling.

I look away.

But not before I see him smile.

 

I stir my coffee.

Long fingers and a silver spoon.

 

Take your mocha
(Solo travellers coffee lid,
Solid lid for travelling coffee,
Coffee lid for coffee travelling,
Solo travelling for lids of coffee.)
Take your mocha,
with you in style.

 

“When does the food car open?”

My stomach is making,

Rather loud protestations.

If and when I don’t eat

At a ratio of 2 meals

Every four hours.

The fuss it makes.”

 

The reading lamp.

How it flickers

Box-Cars how they rattle.

And the insistent drumming of,

Second hand rock n roll.

“Mummy, Mummy!”

Vicar, Gabriel, Lucifer.

What a strange trio.

Even if one of them.

Even if one of them is,

Left out in the cold.

Second class,

What horror!

 

A cigarette that shall calm my nerves.

Shame that it is prohibited.

There he goes smiling again.

What a sly grin that old vicar has.

On his way to surprise a parishioner.

No doubt!

 

“Mummy, Mummy!”

The drama how it unfolds.

What a scene!

Surely I’ve seen it before!

Moliere, Shaw, Bennet?

Riveting at any rate!

 

And the reading lamp!

It continues to flicker,

In fact it has added a new string!

It’s sending off sparks.

Bravo!

The vicar!

Dickensian now.

“Please sir, can I’ve some more?”

His grey head balding in no light!

The Box- Car is rattling.

The mandolin whining.

Gabriel replaced by a ghost!

Lucifer disguised as an orphan!

“Mummy, Mummy.”

The drumming loud, obnoxious.

“For God’s sake, turn it down.”

 

I am lost you may say!

In a sea of freckles.

Though it is a long time,

Since I’ve seen said

Visage.

 

“Mummy, Mummy.”

Poor girl!

Mummy out cold.

I do wish I could sleep,

With such gusto.

 

The reading lamp!

It’s on again.

I’m not the only one-

To breathe a sigh of relief.

The Vicar on his own is reading.

The bible?

No!

Ibsen!

What a cultured man he is.

And still he goes on smiling.

Such a sly grin he has.

 

The carriage still caught in the grip,

Still caught in Miasma.

Wheels trembling!

Mandolin whining.

Drums beating,

“Oh do please turn it down!”

Coffee lids, coffee cups, coffee spoons.

“Mummy, Mummy!”

Box-Car after Box-Car!

Poor Allen.

Rickety Racketing again.

 

Rumbled into sleep,

The chug chugging of the engines,

The rattling of the carriage,

The trembling of the wheels.

The Screeching of the brakes-

And that shadow on the door,

Connecting first with second.

 

 

“Hush little baby,

Don’t you cry,

Momma’s gonna sing you a

Lullaby.”

 

Rumbled into sl....

The chug chugging of.....

The rattling of the carriage,

Trembling wheels.

Screeching brakes-

Shadow on the door,

First with second.

 

“Hush little baby,

Don’t you cry,

Momma’s gonna sing you a

Lullaby.”

 

Poor Allen.

Rickety Racketing again.

 

© 2010 ALifeAquatic


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Very nice my suggestion. shorten it distill your ideas to the lowest common denominator

Posted 14 Years Ago


i thought it was rather rivity, i couldn't stop reading, can't wait to read more from you

Posted 14 Years Ago


Only been reading your stuff for half an hour and love your writing style already. The start really captured me, such description, of the balding man and the lamp etc.
“Mummy, Mummy.”
Poor girl!
Mummy out cold.
That just sent shivers through me, the way it's written "mummy out cold"...



This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 14 Years Ago



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