Life Can Make You Bitter Or Better
A Book by 0_o Abbie
© 2011 0_o Abbie
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Plot: This starts out with girl dealing with the death of her father, who died in a fire 6 months ago and with her new-found feelings for her best friend. Soon she comes to realize who her father really was. What she learns will change her life forever.
Tell me what you think about the dialogue and if the characters seem flat. Also any spelling corrections would be greatly appreciated!
And I know it starts out very slow and romance-ish but don't worry that'll change by about chapter 6 i think.
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Added on January 30, 2011
Last Updated on April 13, 2011
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