All these thoughts

just what I'm thinking.

Staring out the window

Hand pressed to the glass

Wanting to feel the wind blow

To feel the cool blast

 

I'm caught up in these thoughts

The words and pictures of you

I'm caught up in these thoughts

And I don't know what to do

 

I can hear you speak

But I don't know how it sounds

And while I sit here looking meek

My imagination bounds

 

I'm caught up in these thoughts

The words and pictures of you

I'm caught up in these thoughts

And there's nothing I can do

 

Your picture brings a smile

and laughter that's light

I've been talking to you awhile

And now I say goodnight

 

But you haunt my dream

And you don't seem the same

Your eyes have a gleam

like darkness has claim

 

I'm caught up in these thought

The words and pictures of you

I'm caught up in these thoughts

But I'm not sure what to do

 

It's times like these

It's moments like this

Forgive me for asking, please

But are you supposed to be my prince?

 

I'm caught up in the emotions

The whirlwind of love and fear

I want to stop this motion

I want to disappear

 

All these thoughts

Are driving me insane

All of these thoughts

and all this pain

 

I'm not sure what to do

About what I feel

But I do know that you

and these feelings are real.

Author's Note

It's thoughts of him that keep me awake at night.

Reviews

[turtlegirlluver]

wow, this was a very good poem and I can easily relate to it. This was me a month or so ago, yet the wound is still fresh. I know exactly how you feel, and even if I didn't, you show your emotions very well in this piece. Good job!

I like it; "I'm caught up in these thoughts, I'm caught up in these thoughts." It's got a good rhythm. :)

[Laura E. Aranda]

i read thru and the only lines that were nsync was the following:
It's times like these

It's moments like this

Forgive me for asking, please

But are you supposed to be my prince?

I guess this and prince didn't seem to go together...other than that it was cool....
please don't get upset! haha cheers, lea

[laceyjane23]

Great job! i enjoyed this poem, and i can relate to having so many thoughts running through your head that it makes it hard to do pretty much anything... you just have to get them out, and writing is a great way to do that!
laceyjane