Life says....

Life says....

A Poem by Bloody_Stars

 Always falling, never have the time to stop

But life itself does it for you

It ruins every muscle in your body

Freezes your blood 

Takes over your mind

Then basically says, "F**k You."

You have no where to go 

No where to hide

So you just wander around

Stuck in between two worlds

Fighting to get out

To be able to breathe again 

To walk without pain

And then for once life says,"You are free." 

Until the next bump in the road......

 

© 2009 Bloody_Stars


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WOW powerful write here, i like this alot.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I liked this allot very well done for a short poem it kind of reminds me of the guy with cancer in the movie haunting in connecticut and how he's stuck in between life and death as he's slowly dieing

Posted 14 Years Ago



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