Doubt

Doubt

A Poem by Bloody_Stars

Why are you forcing me?

Why do you doubt me sometimes?

I tell you what I want and when

Your just so stubborn at times

I wish you can see my point of view

To fully understand me

And why I say no sometimes

How can you not call it cheating?

To have a baby with someone else while your with me

Even If I may not be fully ready

I told you many time I want another one

Stop doubting me. Stop timing s**t. And Stop reminding me everyday

That you want a kid before your 30, with or without me

I hurt when you say that

And I'm sure you know this

Just take my word for it

Or if this keeps up I might just say goodbye.

© 2011 Bloody_Stars


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I like this one a lot. very well written with a lot of emotion.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was a good write. I could really feel the emotion in it. I saw a few spelling errors but other then that it was really good.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 28, 2011
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Bloody_Stars
Bloody_Stars

San Diego, CA



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