A Poem by Blue Eyes

           Looking up at the sky 
           So very high 
           Looking at the ground
   So very profound
           Looking all around 
           It's all so sound
           Wondering if people know 
   God made it so

© 2011 Blue Eyes

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First, it makes you look around, even if in a room full of books and what not. : ) Second, it allows the reader to find you feeling your own poem in the depth it was meant to be understood!! Nice job with painting an emotional poem in with a heart's view of what remains important in your OWN life. Beautiful Blue Eyes. xoxo -Mark

Posted 8 Years Ago

Vary true and well put. I have noticed that you are not afraid to put your beliefs in your writing and i have a lot of respect for people who can do that.

Posted 9 Years Ago

True and lovely poem with deep meaning. Keep it up.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Absolutely agreed :D

Posted 10 Years Ago

Nicely written! A simple poem, but you really had my attention! I often feel this way when I look around. I cannot believe the beauty God has given us! It truly does my heart good!
A wonderful write!

Posted 10 Years Ago

This is such a great poem. It's simple, but also it has so many words. :)


Posted 10 Years Ago

A simple poem that expresses just how much there is to see in the world, it is good to observe the world.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on January 24, 2011
Last Updated on March 1, 2011
Tags: sky, high, ground, profound, around, sound, know, wondering God, made, us, so, looking, very


Blue Eyes
Blue Eyes

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