God

God

A Poem by Blue Eyes

                                 God is our creator of all
                                 Making the earth and every thing in it
                                 He made the land and the sea 
                                 The people and animals and everything else. 

© 2011 Blue Eyes


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This was a beautiful poem! God is the creator of the heavens and earth. I enjoy nothing better than reading Genesis, it's so fascinating all about how made the earth. It's amazing isn't it. All the different animals, each individual person, God made all of those.
A little mistake...
God is are creator of all- You need to take out the "are". And "the". Just because it doesn't quite make sense.
So it will look like this.....
God is the creator of all!
Hopefully that made sense to you.
A great write, you're very good at poetry. And nothing better than writing poetry praising God!
100/100

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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True, very true... God the Son, Spirit, and Holy Ghost.

Posted 8 Years Ago


God is the Creator of everything, Amen!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


A little short but in my opinion if it was any longer it would lose the beauty of it. I really like this poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


God is above being he or she
God is love and purity
God is natures beauty
God is praise worthy
God is simply
all holy



Posted 10 Years Ago


so true...nice write..but short:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was a beautiful poem! God is the creator of the heavens and earth. I enjoy nothing better than reading Genesis, it's so fascinating all about how made the earth. It's amazing isn't it. All the different animals, each individual person, God made all of those.
A little mistake...
God is are creator of all- You need to take out the "are". And "the". Just because it doesn't quite make sense.
So it will look like this.....
God is the creator of all!
Hopefully that made sense to you.
A great write, you're very good at poetry. And nothing better than writing poetry praising God!
100/100

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Blue Eyes

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