Ahem...

This was written 4 o'clock one morning after a long night of work. Another "write what comes to mind first" sort of things.

We’re here to fight
We’re here to win.

Let go of your hope

Let go of your sin.
Take away the outside,

 not what’s within
Slice their nose
And bite their shin.

/ We can listen, but not pretend...

The fact I’m hear, but outwardly dead
Hold your breath and shake your head.
Fight the press and kick the Fed.
Toss the bomb and break your bed.

Let’s make peace.
Pieces of glass
Holding the bridge
Hope it will last.


Break your mind and close your soul
Take the part but not the whole
Take the fall and make it roll.
Break the bell, but keep the toll.


/With everyone who’s made it this far to the end...


Barry your head into the sand.
Crack the whip at the marching band
Crash you cars and slap your hand.
Hold supply and ditch demand.

Let’s make love.
Love is cold
Unsheltered and old
Not so great, but blindingly bold.
Not for sale, yet already sold.
Taken for granted and made into gold.


/ Broken and painted under spot lights stare...

Take the shot and make it stick
Hold your tongue, dare not to lick
From the cup of Satan; that awful prick.
Banished away, mentally sick.
Horribly balanced and horridly quick.


Lonely and crawling,
Deadly and bawling.
Thunder threw him_Thunder cursed him_Thunder will pursue him.

/ We’re the ones, the ones that care...

Make a mask and hide behind.
Shave your arms and read their mind.
Take away myth and then combined.
Truth with thought intertwined.

Let’s make war!

Perspire, fall,

Shriek, call,
Keel over and crawl.
Growl then maul.


And then she said, “Let them eat cake.”

Reviews

[Franklin...]

Really, I have no idea what this one's about. Plenty of possibilities, but I'm just not sure. I'm not sure I care, either. It has such a great sense of rhythm and rhyme that I enjoyed reading it in all its ambiguous glory.
"Let’s make peace.
Pieces of glass
Holding the bridge
Hope it will last." Love those lines.
Very unique piece of writing.

[deeps]

Make a mask and hide behind.
Shave your arms and read their mind.
Take away myth and then combined.
Truth with thought intertwined.

Love these lines here, This is a wonderful and so creative write.
Amazing write!