Have you ever?

Gave up?

on searching

for yourself.

for your friends

for everthing.

gave up

 

Gave up?

trying to act like someone

your not.

told someone to shut their faces

when you only tried to

act cool.

give up

 

Gave up?

On trying to beat your

top score on that

video game level.

cause it seems easy

 

Gave up?

on trying to act

like someone

your not.

cause i did.

 

and look just how i turned out

Reviews

[GamingGal]

Pros: Good poem with a good layout. It flows pretty well, and I like the ending. I like how in the end you tell us to stop pretending to be someone we're not. We all should embrace who we are.

Cons: Nothing really.

Overall: A poem I enjoyed :)

[Cynthia]

Great Poem!
Very Interesting Poem