Alone

I am alone but never lonely

In a place where I call mine

I sit all night just longing

Longing for the stars to shine

I am alone watching the fountain

Waters singing round and round

In a night full of stars shining

As my feet stays on the ground

I am alone in this starry night

In the park and no one cares

Years passed as I released a sigh

I was always alone for many years

I am alone, yes I am forgotten

This may be the way for me to grow

From the words that's making me rotten

Someday I know this feeling will go.

Reviews

[Dead Poetix]

Sorry for the delay. I like the formal nature of this - holds together nicely. But I've got some questions that might be interesting to investigate.

We start off with "I am alone but never lonely" but yet we're "longing for the stars to shine." It's almost like not lonely except for the stars, maybe?

Then the next stanza, we get a "night full of stars." So then I think, Great! We're not alone right? But sort of. Is loneliness a dichotomy? It totally can be!

Then in the last stanza, we learn that there's "words that's making me rotten," and we're "grow(ing)" away from them? So (and I could be reading this wrong) there's something said in the past that caused a change?

IN ANY case, maybe ideas addressed or could be addressed in other poems? I'm being awfully literal so please take with ample salt.

[Schatzi]

Hello Christian Bonoan,

Such a lonely poem. I feel so sad now . . . and very lonely.

Kind regards,

Schatzi

[TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSh..]

Loneliness will always be a part of life. Your honesty here has lead you to an independence or liberation of some sorts. Such a pretty little package for something that is part of the human condition. Loneliness.

Sheer Terror

[Christian Bonoan]

Thank you for this review :)

[Viola Win]

one of the most emotional and accurate poem i've ever written! salute!

[Nwang]

This is great!!
Very deep poem.
Keep it up.

[Emily]

Lovely wording!
Keep it up!

[Hanah Gotski]

I am alone but never lonely- such a beautiful and deep line. A sad yet soothing poem!

[Lydia Shutter]

Always possible to be alone and not feel lonely, but it is sad when you think people have forgotten you. There are a couple of grammatical errors in this poem, but the meaning comes across. Lydi**

[Anjali]

Christian, A splendid poem. A 100/100 out of me for carving the words so beautifully that I could imagine the poet's environment and surrounding as well as feel the emotions depicted here. Keep up the good work!

[Christian Bonoan]

Thanks for this review! I appreciate this so much

[J.M. Wise]

I often feel that people will look at beautiful words and not see the meaning behind them. This could use some work, do not forget that English is a language to be manipulated and played with, but not misused. However, I do like the significance of the poem.

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