Worthless in dying

Worthless in dying

A Poem by Life Is Blue
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Credits to my friend Fallen Hero he thought of the title and helped me with the poem.

"
Sick of crying
Tired of trying
Yeah i'm smiling but..
inside i'm dying

Why isn't the chains shining
Why can't i keep smiling

Filled with pain
Thinking as i'm laying
Died with the rain
inside i'm decaying

I can't sleep
I can't find my feelings

Hollow inside
Just feeling blue
I've got no pride
What to do i got no clue

Now i'm torn
Now i wont revive

Scars wont heal
Hearts will breake
To death i appeal
I wont die for that sake

I can only fail
I can do nothing but think

Sanity isn't good
Hoping for releaf as i lay
Sorrow is my only loot
I got nothing more to say

© 2010 Life Is Blue


Author's Note

Life Is Blue
Reviews and creative critisism is allways good.
(Yea that was a little hint)

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I'd really enjoyed this one. It is strong and tender.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This poem is pretty good!
I love the line
"Scars wont heal
Hearts will breake
To death i appeal
I wont die for that sake"

Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing!
~A Fallen Heroine~

Posted 10 Years Ago


few spelling erros here and there, but otherwise a nice emotional poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this :D not just because i helped with it but because it show the foundations of your feelings... That's how i like a poem. Great read, and thanks for sharing


A Fallen Hero

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Life Is Blue
Life Is Blue

Brande, Midtjylland, Denmark



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