Worthless in dying

Credits to my friend Fallen Hero he thought of the title and helped me with the poem.

Sick of crying

Tired of trying

Yeah i'm smiling but..

inside i'm dying

Why isn't the chains shining

Why can't i keep smiling

Filled with pain

Thinking as i'm laying

Died with the rain

inside i'm decaying

I can't sleep

I can't find my feelings

Hollow inside

Just feeling blue

I've got no pride

What to do i got no clue

Now i'm torn

Now i wont revive

Scars wont heal

Hearts will breake

To death i appeal

I wont die for that sake

I can only fail

I can do nothing but think

Sanity isn't good

Hoping for releaf as i lay

Sorrow is my only loot

I got nothing more to say

Author's Note

Reviews and creative critisism is allways good.
(Yea that was a little hint)

Reviews

[Candy]

I'd really enjoyed this one. It is strong and tender.

[A Risen Heroine.]

This poem is pretty good!
I love the line
"Scars wont heal
Hearts will breake
To death i appeal
I wont die for that sake"

Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing!
~A Fallen Heroine~

[Drako]

few spelling erros here and there, but otherwise a nice emotional poem

[FallenHeroXx]

I really like this :D not just because i helped with it but because it show the foundations of your feelings... That's how i like a poem. Great read, and thanks for sharing


A Fallen Hero