Worthless in dying

Worthless in dying

A Poem by Life Is Blue

Credits to my friend Fallen Hero he thought of the title and helped me with the poem.

Sick of crying
Tired of trying
Yeah i'm smiling but..
inside i'm dying

Why isn't the chains shining
Why can't i keep smiling

Filled with pain
Thinking as i'm laying
Died with the rain
inside i'm decaying

I can't sleep
I can't find my feelings

Hollow inside
Just feeling blue
I've got no pride
What to do i got no clue

Now i'm torn
Now i wont revive

Scars wont heal
Hearts will breake
To death i appeal
I wont die for that sake

I can only fail
I can do nothing but think

Sanity isn't good
Hoping for releaf as i lay
Sorrow is my only loot
I got nothing more to say

© 2010 Life Is Blue

Author's Note

Life Is Blue
Reviews and creative critisism is allways good.
(Yea that was a little hint)

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I'd really enjoyed this one. It is strong and tender.

Posted 9 Years Ago

This poem is pretty good!
I love the line
"Scars wont heal
Hearts will breake
To death i appeal
I wont die for that sake"

Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing!
~A Fallen Heroine~

Posted 10 Years Ago

few spelling erros here and there, but otherwise a nice emotional poem

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this :D not just because i helped with it but because it show the foundations of your feelings... That's how i like a poem. Great read, and thanks for sharing

A Fallen Hero

Posted 10 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Added on December 31, 2010
Last Updated on December 31, 2010


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