Dedicated

Dedicated

A Poem by Life Is Blue
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Made for a great friend of mine

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I'm not as i used to be
'Cause you made me change
Me myself and i are not the one i know
Find my way through love
United in tales of sorrow and hatred
Can't control the thoughts
Kill my mind as it is now
Endore me for what i was
Don't think you can change me back
Such things as your trust
Or faith in me are not things i can get back
Right?
Rain are the final thing to complete my sorrow
You are still my best friend..
All i want is you to forgive me
Because i want you as my friend always
Or until we die at least
United as one to defeat an enemy
That sounded stupid i know
Though you haven't forgot
Hatred is still in your mind i know
Am i right?
Think i'm done now.. C'ya
Written: April 2.th 2011
Dedication: The person would know

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© 2011 Life Is Blue


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This is Awesome. I really like it!

~A Fallen Heroine~

Posted 10 Years Ago


Honestly, I feel you've worked your wording exactly. Painful and sweet, like the poetry of Shelly or Behan. a clear imagery of shocking absolutism and a no-ire remediableness. Easy flow and time, good read. Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Life Is Blue
Life Is Blue

Brande, Midtjylland, Denmark



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I'm 15 i think alot and at the moment i'm blue. Blue is some kind of deep sadness or depression. I like to wrtie about love agony and everything that i otherwise feel more..

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A Poem by Life Is Blue