A girl I once knew

Far far away...where the birds don't sing
 a little girl cries for the person she is...
She cries for the the girl she wishes she could be...
the girl she once was...she wishes she could go back in time..
Back in time to that very day...when they chose how her life would be...

Far far away...where the stars don't shine
a little girl cries for her everyday life...
she cries for the life she wants...the life she once had...
But since that day...she hasn't been the same...

She looks in the mirror and does not know who she see's
she talks out loud and does not recognize the voice...
she takes photo's and she cant see herself...
she hears a name...but she does not know it....

She only knows herself in that old photo album...
the old photo album is the world she lives in....
the perfect world that she had....
the world that no longer exists....

For as long she has that old photo album open...
everything's perfect for her.... but once shut....
everything changes...she changes...she cant be herself...
because no one knows who she really is...
She's just a girl i once knew...

Reviews

[Rev. Fr, S. D. Blankens..]

This is a nice, sad rant of past years. I hope one day you can return to that young lady.

(Review) There are some spelling/ grammar mistakes, (i.e. "She's just a girl (i) once knew...) (i) should be a capital (I). The flow needs some work, but show me a writer who's works don't need help and I'll show you someone who has never written. The style of your word formatting is exquisite.


(Side note) I am subscribing to your work and I have sent you a friend request.

~S. D. Blankenship