Thanks

Thanks

A Poem by BlueberryKisses

Thanks for hurting me.

Thanks for thinking I won't care.

Thanks for making me feel worse.

Thanks for the stuff you couldn't share.

 

Thanks for making me feel bad.

Thanks for days I was oblivious.

Thanks for making me feel sad,

When I found out about all this.

 

I guess we are totally different.

I dont understand how.

My life is full of your problems.

Im drowing but I can't reach out,

I can't reach out to save myself.

 

I don't expect anyone to be the same as me.

I guess Im just not that lucky.

I always am the second choice,

The one after you.

But sometimes I just wanna drop it all.

Scream and f*****g shout.

Go to the people who I wanna be with.

Leave you the f**k out.

© 2011 BlueberryKisses


Author's Note

BlueberryKisses
Angry/hurt....

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Hell of a closing line once was strong and rage filled once always works
sorry i havent read your work sooner cause honestly your a heck of a read people can break us at times but for writers what they dont seem to get is it's just fuel for the fire cheers
Gonzo

Posted 12 Years Ago


:'(

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Good to write down anger. Allow the anger to be release to a sheet of paper. You answer your questions in the end.
"Go to the people who I wanna be with.
Leave you the f**k out. "
Thank you for a powerful poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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BlueberryKisses
BlueberryKisses

Darlington, United Kingdom



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