Baby

Baby

A Poem by BlueberryKisses
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Wrote it a few week ago :3

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I'd never of thought that I'd say this to you,

I've fallen for a friend and it's true,

I can't stand not to be near,

Your beautiful laugh is what I want to hear,

The time with you is a dream come true,

Babygirl, I think I'm in love with you.

© 2012 BlueberryKisses


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This is probably my favourite , i agree with that person for its length it sure has alot


Posted 10 Years Ago


BlueberryKisses

10 Years Ago

Thank you :P
For it's lenght it's very exciting, I can feel the sheer attachment within the 6 lines.... Godd job

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Curt, to the point, caring without being overly sentimental. Nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago



That's exactly how I feel.

Posted 12 Years Ago


that is really awsome!

I

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on October 14, 2011
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BlueberryKisses
BlueberryKisses

Darlington, United Kingdom



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Hi, I'm Hannah c: I'm 19 and have an amazing set of friends and a wonderful boyfriend and I like writing poems c: more..

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