Prologue: Throw It All Away

Prologue: Throw It All Away

A Chapter by Bluefire
"

For selfish reasons I will throw everything away.

"

Why is it that when I desperately want to cry, tears never appear.

Yet when I fight them, they flow freely until I beg them to stop.

I am accepted only because I appear human.

I am protected only because someone gave birth to me.

I am only here to be what people see. Nothing more and nothing less.

But. . .

I long for freedom.

And a monsterous body can give me the freedom.

To escape humanity and society. To travel and never be tied down by chains of morality and what is right.

Yes, that's right.

I will become a demon someday.

For selfish reasons I will throw everything away.



© 2014 Bluefire


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This left me wanting more. The last line really did stand out to me. I have no idea why, but it really did. Hmm it makes me wonder a couple of things, but I will just read to find out. Thank you for sharing. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Bluefire

10 Years Ago

=3 Thank you for reading and reviewing!
This sounds like it has the potential to be a very compelling story just from this little bit that you have in the prologue. It makes me wonder who the narrator is and what sort of person they are

Only one way to find out. To chapter one I go!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Bluefire

10 Years Ago

^^ I hope you shall not be disappointed.
Thanks for reading and reviewing! It means a lot.
Interesting. I like the idea of this, how the main character seems.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Bluefire

10 Years Ago

Thank you! ^^
Silent Wolf

10 Years Ago

Welcome. :)
Very interesting. At first (not offence) i felt this was going to be a sad emo story but I loved the twist about becoming a demon. This is very original and I know ill enjoy it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Bluefire

10 Years Ago

Pffffttt XD No offence taken. Actually, I find it quite EMO. I'm not sure if it bothers me or not, t.. read more
Taylor_McCutcheon

10 Years Ago

haha oh well ok than :) You're welcome :)
Interesting prologue, beautiful lines;

I am accepted only because I appear human.
I am protected only because someone gave birth to me.
I am only here to be what people see. Nothing more and nothing less.

Kaze~ :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Bluefire

10 Years Ago

Thank you! ^^
♔ CrownedDevil ☾

10 Years Ago

Your very welcome. :-D
Interesting Intriguing, I defiantly Enjoyed reading this.

Beautiful Lines.

Why is it that when I desperately want to cry, tears never appear.

Yet when I fight them, they flow freely until I beg them to stop.

Blessings. Kindred poet


Posted 10 Years Ago


Bluefire

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

You're very welcome. Blessings. kindred poet
Demon, but what constitutes a demon? Hmn . . . Intriguing, definitely reading on when I have the time.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Bluefire

10 Years Ago

Maybe I should have said monster... I don't know.
Thanks for reading and reviewing! ^^
Tai Ryens

10 Years Ago

I would have very much preferred to stay vague and say that you were to "transcend from your human f.. read more
This is a great prologue i can't wait to read more of your books and poems keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read i love reading them

Posted 10 Years Ago


Bluefire

10 Years Ago

Thank you! ^^
melissa

10 Years Ago

Your welcome

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